Pyaar sunne mein behad khaas aur sundar shabd h.... Par uska ehsaan usse bhi jyada khaas aur khusnuma hota h.
Hum sabne kbhi naa kbhi apni school life ya college life mein kisi naa kisi ko dekh kr ye jaroor feel kiya hoga
" Yrrr kyaa banda/bandi h vo, haayee mere life partner to aisa hi hona chahiye "

Sachii sachii btana socha h naa kbhi na kbhi.
To aaj ki kahani bhi kch vaisi hi h

Hiiii mai hu Tanya
Aap sab ki chaheti writer aur self obsessed insaan.

Aaj mai phirse se aapke saamne prastut hu ek nayi kahani ke sath
Jisko pdh kr aap apne college ya school crush ko jaroor yaad krne vale ho uss dosti ko jaroor yaad krne vale ho.

So without any further bakwas let's peep inside the story.

Aaj ki kahani h Ritvik aur Shivani ki who meet after a long span of time & fall for each other.

Beautifully decorated sitting area where two people is sitting.
We see a beautiful girl in a party dress in front of her a handsome young man was sitting who seems in his own world. Finally we see the face of girl a gorgeous lady with charming smile.

Rohit you know how much i missed this place. This place hold many memories of togetherness of us, the girl said.

But she doesn't get any reply

Rohit.... Rohit (she called his name few more time & jerked him out of his lane if thoughts)

Sorry shivani.... What was you saying, rohit asked.

I was saying that we should... Forget it. U said ur going to talk about something with me, shivani replied him.

Yeahh... Shivani i think it's not working yrr

Rohit i didn't get ur point, kuch aur order kre tmhe ye psnd nhi aaya kyaa, shivani replies impatiently.

Nhi nhii.. Mai khaane ke baat nhi kr rha I am talking about our relationship hum hmare relationship ke baare mein baat kr rha hu it's not working anymore yrr it has become like.... I can't explain it's like this cabbage which has no taste in noodles does it make any sense, rohit explained her.

You are saying that i become like this shredded cabbage in ur life am i not good looking enough for u Or there is some issue that we can discuss. . . U know what maya was right, she freaked out.

She took her bag & move ahead of the table but returns after few step & splashes a glass of water over his face.

You know what i want u to remember this day forever that one day a girl dumped u, shivani replied boldly.

She left from there was on deserted road with her sandles in her hand tears were rolling down her cheeks she fall in middle of the road..... She get up & moved ahead aimlessly.
A boy with bike crosses her but he takes u turn stops near her he removes his helmet & waved his hand in front of her.

Ritvik Tu mujhe lga hi tha ki tu hi h jo aise bike ko chla nhi uda rha h..... Shivani said with quick happiness on her face & wiping off the tears

Bilkul thik lga jahapanah, ritvik replied happily

Tu bilkul nhi bdla yrr, shivani commented

Mai to bilkul nhi bdla par tu badal gyi h vaise ye sunsaan sadak par vo bhi party dress mein barefoot chlna is this a new trend in goa, ritivik asked.

He parks his bike & opens his bag 's chain & take out a pair of sandles.

Tum mere ho rahe...
Ya ho gaye

I have something for you, ritvik showed her sandles & said

He went on his knees & signals to hold him by shoulder & put her feet into sandles... She smiles & do the same he secured the straps & get up.

Ya hai faasla
Puche dil toh kahun main kya bhala
Dil sawaalon se hi na de rula

He smiles on her which made her blush unknown to her. He asked her for a ride to which she agrees & both left for a beach side cafeteria.

Hota kya hai aahista aahista

Hona kya hai aahista aahista

Aahista sung by arijit singh & jonita gandhi from "laila majnu"

I missed this noodles yrr.... Goa aur yha ke flavours just amazing, he commented satisfied.

On getting no reply from shivani he turns his face & focuses on her eyes.

Heyy r u crying

No it's just chilli u know naa how bad is my spice tolerance bhaiya paani lana, she replied.

Waiter puts water bottle on table & ritvik pours water in glass & forwards it to shivani she drank few sips.

Vaise tu ye bta tu yha kb aaya aur kitne din rukne vala h it's strange yrr ki aunty ne btaya nhi ki tu aane vala h..... (Some think hit her mind) ohh sorry aunty ne call kiya tha par mai jldi mein thi i had a date, she spoke

Are u dating someone, ritvik asked immediately.

Yess in my head until a few hours ago we broke up.... Actually he dumped me, shivani replied a little moody.

I am sorry u r....

Devasted, shivani cut him in middle
No... Actually i have an idea can u come with me

Ritvik & shivani both left there seats & left for there destination.

Proper Patola Nakhra Ae Swag
Suit Patiala Shahi Chunni Teri Black
Oh Munde Haunke Bharde Tainu Takk Takk Ke
Turrey Jado Hath Tu Lakk Utte Rakh Ke

Both were at a club party songs were playing in background

Hum yha kyu aaye h, ritvik asked.

What...

Hum yha kyu aaye h, he said a little louder

Party krne, shivani replied

Okk, ritvik responded

She was enjoying & vibing with song with her mocktail until her eyes fell on rohit who was dancing with a girl. She take the wine glass whivh is served to another man & drink it in one go.

Let's go... Shivani ordered

Where & why ritivik asked

Chlo naaa

She hold his hand & took him outside shivani opens the door of car & both settles inside.

Aaj to upar vala bhi mere upar meharbaan h.... Aaj bhi car lock krna bhul gya... Shivani said

Ye teri car nhi h

Nhii... Rohit ki h ab dekh tu mera kamal

Shivani sprays her perfume put her lipstick on car seat & plants her earring into car both sneak out of car & hide behind a tree to see the results.

I can't believe this Tu ab bhi... Ye idea kb aaya tujhe

Abhi aaya... Ab dekhna kitna maza aayega

The girl with mohit come & settles in the car she sensed the female perfume she also noticed the lipstick & earring. She get out of car & slaps rohit very hard.

Tum mere sath time pass kr rhe the kya h ye sab.... Ye earring ye lipstick

Baby i really don't know about all this ki ye kha se aaya

Don't try to call me.... Isse yhi khtm krte h

The girl left the place furiously shivani & ritvik hi-fied with each other. Shivani was laughing at her boyfriend 's state ritvik lost in her eyes for a while.

Ritvik ke liye ye ehsas bilkul naya tha kch special. Uske anjaane mein hi shivani ki khushi ab mayne rkhne lgi thi.
Shivani ko bhi khi na khi ritvik ka sath acha lg rha tha par naa jaane kyu vo abhi iss ehsas ke liye taiyaar nhi thi.
Sayad iski vajah rohit ka dhokha tha.. Par vo kya h ki pyaar apni jagah dhundh hi leta.

Yrrr shivani Tu to abhi bhi college time ki tarah h college mein bhi tune maya ka breakup krwane ke liye yhi kiya tha, ritvik said controlling his laughs.

Ab maya ko uss toxic insaan ki toxicity smjh hi nhi aa rhi thi to ye krna to pdta naa.... Par uska result bhi dekh lo she doesn't like me anymore, shivani replied sadly.

But iss baar sayad tujhe teri frnd vapas mil jaaye, he said ringing the bell of the house.

A girl come out who was in night suit.

Ritvik..... Shivani Tu tum dono sath mein..?
She asked shockingly

Maya mai naa apne dosto ke sath tha shivani mujhe whi mili to maine socha ghar le aau isse... As of now she has no place to live that's why.

Come inside, maya replied politely

Maya Tu ab bhi naraz h mujh se... Par maine jo kch bhi kiya buss tujhe uss toxic relationship se bchane ke liye kiya tha

Shivu.... Kitna sochti h Tu uss baat to kai saal ho gye aur tu kha tha itne din se ritvik

Just busy with some useless things in life ab tum dono best frnds baatein kro i am going to sleep bye & good night, ritvik replied

Good night maya & shivani wished him.

Next morning, shivani was spraying water on plants. Ritvik come from behind and taps on her shoulder.

Paudhe murjha gye h to paani daal rhi hu

Ritvik takes the spray bottle from her hand & starts spraying water over her face

What are u doing ritvik

Tum bhi to murjha gyi ho, ritvik replies

Duniya ke dastoor se
Door hai tu
Mere naino ka saara
Noor hai tu
Meri saans ke har mod pe
Sapno ke chhor pe
Dekh sirf tere hain nishaan

Ritvik stares her face with a great smile, wind blows and covers the face of shivani with her hairs ritvik glides his finger over her face & fix the strands behind her ears both felt a diffrent sensation

Aye bairaagi teri laagi

Laagi re...
Aye bairaagi teri laagi
Laagi re...

He wipes the water droplets over her face

Aye bairaagi teri laagi
Laagi re...
Aye bairaagi teri laagi
Laagi re...

Bairaagi sung by arijit singh from bareilly ki barfi

Heyy dude kya kr rhe ho, maya asks coming near them.

This broke their trance of thoughts & make them come into reality

Thik h tu, maya said hugging shivani

Yeahh i am fine, shivani replied

Kyaa okk yrr.. Just look at her face
Dekh naa yrr ye kaise murjha gyi h, ritvik again sprays water.

Ritvik.... Maya nods her head in no

Vaise aaj saturday night h kya plan h chl rhi h naa hmare sath, ritvik asked maya

Sorry yrr actually ek urgent kaam aa gya h isiliye mai nhi aa paaugi but next time pakka mai niklti hu byee,maya said

Byee... Both bid adieu to maya

Night time ritvik & shivani was sitting & watching movie while eating noodles.

What is this designing & videos..? Tune to engineering ki thi naa.? Shivani asked

Engineering to maine buss mumma ke kehne par kiya tha.... Par designing is my passion, ritvik replied

Isn't it risk.. ?

Risk hi to h jo life ki gaadi ko chalati h.
Aur aise bhi kitne din khud ko rokta yrr mai

Wow..... Tum kitni badi badi baatein krne lge ho achaa ye bta ki girlfriend vgarh h ki nhii...

Let me count... 1,2,3,4...total of 7

7 girlfriend.... U liar, she takes the cushion & throws it on ritvik

Dekheya main chand dekheya
Nooran wale sitare dekheya
Par tere jaisa na koi dekheya main

Par no one to Tu hi h, ritvik said

Lagta hai nigahon mein teri
B

in doobe rehna hi nahi
Mujhe ishq yeh karne se
Ab koi bhi na rok sakeya

Ouchh..... Ritvik stops the cushion & take it from her hand & wind being witness of their love..... A strong gush of wind blew & again shivani's hair strands fall over her face ritvik again fall into the slumber of her eyes & fixes the strand of hair behind her ears.

O haareya main dil haareya
O haareya main dil haareya
O haareya main dil haareya

Haareya sung by arijit singh composed by sachin-jigar from
Meri pyaari bindu

Shivani brokes the silence

You know what ritvik... Mera bhi ek dream tha ki mai papa ka cafe phirse start kru cafe miranda phir se shuru kru..... I love to cook i love to host i love to feed people inn paanch saalo mein mai bhul gyi ki mai kya hu mere dreams kya h.... And for now i am managing accounts for a company, shivani said.

Tha nhi h.... Jab tk dreams pure nhi hote tb tk vo jinda rehte h aur jb tk hmare dil mein unhe pura krne ki bechaini ho tb tk hum zinda rehte h, ritvik suggested her

Mtlb technically mai mar chuki thi... Ohh god... I loved someone & get lost too much that i forget who i am...Shivani hold her head.

Par ab to ho gya naa tmhara... Punarjanm
Try kr apne sapne pure kr... Pyaar vo nhi h jo tujhe apne sapbo se dur kre... Pyaar vo h jo tujhe tere sapno ke karib le jaaye, ritvik commented.

Shivani get lost in his words his words made her heart flutter but she composed herself.

It's quite late let's sleep Tu bhi so jaa.. Good night..

Kyaa khub kha ritvik ne nhi.. Pyaar vo nhi h jo aapko aapke sapno se dur kr apni katputli bna le pyaar vo h jo ungli pakad kr aapko aapke sapno ke raaste par chlna sikha de.

Ritvik ki iss baat ne shivani ko ye sochne par mazboor kr diya ki kya usse dobara pyar ho rha h ya ye sirf ek attraction h uske dil mein ritvik ke liye ek soft corner hmesha se tha par badhti nazdikiyo ke sath ye badh rha tha..

I miss you dad.... I feel lonely in this world, shivani cried over a photo frame.

Heyy shivu... Why r u crying i told u naa ki rohit is just playing with ur emotions he is such a liar & idiot.... He doesn't deserve you. Think about uncle yrr.. He will feel so guilty after seeing u in this condition.. Let's go outside for a cycle race, maya said wiping off all tears.

Trio went for cycling maya was little ahead of shivani & ritvik both was smiling & laughing.

Mangaan ae hi duavaan main
Channa tu mainu mill jaa
Tenu na bol pawaan main
Tu aape hi samajh ja

Shivani 's eyes fell on her father's cafe with a huge board
"" Cafe Miranda ""

She looks into eyes if ritvik & he nods in yess. She turns her cycle in the direction of cafe. Ritvik also follows her

Saamne baith ja takda jaaun
Akhiyon mein teri gum ho jaaun
Mujhe dhoondhe na phir koi..

In night time shivani takes out a album from her luggage & sat on sofa with teary eyes she smiles on the photographs she hugs the album & sleep there on sofa.

Mangaan ae hi duavan main
Channa tu mainu mil ja
Tenu na bol pawaan main
Tu aape hi samajh ja

Tenu naa bol pawaan main
Sung by Yasser Desai & Jyotica Gandhi
Penned by Rohit Sharma
From "Behen hogi teri"

Ritvik puts her feet on the sofa & covers her with blanket.
Next day in night shivani & ritvik was chatting through msgs maya was sitting near shivani & noticed her smiling.

Hmmm.. To kissi guftgu ki jaa rhi h, she asked her.

Kisi se nhi.. Kl monday h office jana h naa tujhe chl so jaa, shivani tell maya

Ohh.. Haa mere to dimaag se hi nikl gya tha mai so rhi hu tu bhi so jaa...saying this she laid down & sleeps.

Next morning shivani was roaming on streets it started raining.... She covers her head with her purse then she felts a shed.

Pehli baar hai ji, pehli baar hai ji
Iss qadar kisi ki dhun sawaar hai ji
Jiski aas mein hui subah se dopehar
Shaam ko usika intezaar hai ji

Ritvik puts her hand down which was covering her head.

Hosh hai zara
Zara zara khumaar hai ji
Chhed ke gaya
Woh aise dil ke taar hai ji

She was just looking into his eyes getting lost.

Tum yha.. She asked

Haa yhi pas mein ek dost rehta h ussi se milne aaya tha, he replied

Achaa yha kaun sa dost rehta h

Kabir vo yhi piche vali gali mein rehta h naa... Yha naa pas mein ek bhot acha cafe h wha chlte h baarish bhi ruk jaayegi tb tk

Okk... Mai maya ko bhi call kr deti hu

Aree nhi... Vo actually naa maya ek meeting mein gyi h to hum chlte h he said cutting her in middle.

Okk... Shivani replied

Pehli baar hai ji, pehli baar hai ji
Iss qadar kisi ki dhun sawaar hai ji
Jiski aas mein hui subah se dopehar
Shaam ko usika intezaar hai ji...

Vaise naa ye umbrella bnd kr de aise bhi mai thora to bheeg hi rhi hu, shivani said.

Uska bhi solution h mere pas

Ritvik hold her by arm & pulled her near to him.

Hadbadi mein, har ghadi hai
Dhadkane hui baawari
Saara din usey dhoondhte rahe
Naino ki lagi naukri...
Dikh gayi toh hai usi mein
Aaj ki kamaayi meri
Muskura bhi de toh mujhe lage
Jeet li koi lottery...

Both again get lost in each other eyes but shivani taps him

Chle ya yhi rehna h, she said

Chlo...

Both was sitting & sipping hot coffee there a boy come & taps ritvik's back

Kyu be bhul gya mujhe 3 saal ss no meet up no calls...

Kabir Tu yhaa.. Ritvik said in shock

Haa mai yha aur ye kaun h, Kabir asked

Ye meri dost h shivani maine btaya tha naa

Hii shivani, Kabir forwards his hand for a friendly handshake

Hii Kabir..... Shivani replies politely

Trio get into a warm friendly conversation reminiscing their college days suddenly shivani 's eyes fell on rohit. He went near her & take her into a forced hug

I love you shivani i know maine tmhe dhoka diya par..... I am regretting my decision for real. Plz meri life mein vapas aa jaao....

Rohit leave me.... Aaj tmhare sath tmhari girlfriend nhi h isiliye tmhe mai vapas chahiye tmhari jindagi mein...shivani said struggling to get out of his hug

Ritvik punched rohit hard

Tum ho kaun aur mujhe maara kaise tmne...

Aise... Ritvik replied punching him again

Ye hmara matter h stay out of it

Ye tmhara matter tha jb tk shivani aur tum relationship mein the par for your jind information aaj se thik 4 din 6 ghante 55 min pehle tmne shivani se breakup kiya tha, ritvik said with attitude.

Tu hota kaun h ye bolne vala

Banda hu mai shivani ka... Girlfriend h ab vo meri chl nikal yha se varna abhi yhi naak tod dunga mai tmhari

Chl... Ritvik pushed him out of the cafe

Scene changes & we see shivani sitting outside cafe miranda.

Shivani, why are you upset i got it mujhe nhi kehna chahiye tha vo sab par...

Tmhe lgta h tmhe mere baare mein sab pta jo man mein aata h bol dete ho jo man mein aata hai kr dete ho but u can't tell people that u r my boyfriend plz ritvik stay away from it... Mai already bhot kch kho chuki hu i don't want ki tmhari vajah se mai apni bestfriend phir se kho du just leave me alone.

Shivani furiously get up to leave but ritvik hold her hand & pull her as a result shivani land on his rigid chest making her shocked.

Shivani i know i overstepped yrr.. For that i am really sorry mujhe sabke samne khudko tmhara boyfriend nhi kehna chahiye tha par uss vakt mere pas koi ur rasta hi nhi tha.. Ritvik said all this to defend himself

Really aur koi rasta nhi tha isiliye jo man mein aaya bak diya do i look like joke to you ki jab chahe kch bhi bol do.

I know shivu it's my fault but i really meant it... Maine dekha vo tmhe kitna pareshaan krta h..... I can't see you suffering like this.

Why.... Why u can't leave me alone ritvik for god sake stop bothering me tmhe kya fark pdta h it's my life my situation ship. Shivani chided.

Fark pdta h yrr.. Because i love you yrr

S

hivani get shocked hearing this sentence

Yeahh.. It's true i love u mujhe fark nhi pdta ki tum mere confession ke badle mein positive results ke sath confess kro ya naa kro.... But i will love u forever.
Aur mujhe ye bilkul bardaasht nhi h ki rohit ne jo bhi aaj kiya aage bhi agar vaisi harkat kisi ne kiya to mai whi kruga jo aaj maine kiya.... Vaise mai ye dene aaya tha

He take out some legal documents

Cafe ke owner maan gye h iss cafe ko dobara open krne ke liye... He said & left from there.

Night time
Shivani went back home she founds a tensed maya.

What happened ? shivani asked

Mai kbse ritvik ko call kr rhi vo naa to call utha rha naa kch abhi tk vo ghar nhi aaya

Hearing this sentence shivani left the place immediately she founds ritvik sitting on a bench drenching in rain
She puts the umbrella he feels the rain stopped he turns & found her standing there.

Tmhe kya lgta h jo man mein aayega vo kroge aur koi tmhe kch nhi khega...?
U know mai kitna dar gyi thi kha chle gye the phone bhi switched off tha aur maya uska kyaa....

Tmhe kya fark pdta h mere hone naa hone se...

Chehrey mein tere
Khud ko main doondun

Fark pdta h bcoz i love you tooo.. Pta nhi kbse par i feel secure in ur arms mai vapas se khud ke liye jeena sikh gyi hu sirf tmhari vajah se... I love you ritvik

Aankon ke darmiyan
Tu ab hai iss tarah
Kwabon ko bi jaga na miley

Ritvik hugs her she rested her forehead on ritvik's shoulder

Ritvik plants a soft kiss on shivani 's head.

Ye mousam ki baarish
Ye baarish ka pani
Ye pani ki boonden

Tuje hi toh doonde
Yeh milney ki kwahish
Yeh kwahish purani
Ho poori tuji se
Meri yeh kahani

Baarish from" half girlfriend " by ash king & shasha tirupati

Shivani also responded his hug & hugs him so tightly.
One day shivani & ritvik was enjoying on beach when maya calls shivani.

Hii shivani.. (She notices the background)
Tu office mein nhi h..?

Hloo maya mai office mein hi thi but abhi office frnds ke sath bahar aayi hu tu bta kaise call kiya

Yrr i am so confused what to wear actually mujhe immediately ek meeting ke liye delhi jana h Tu bta kaunsi dress pehnu

Shivani helped her to choose the dress & they end the call.

Ritvik hum sahi to kr rhe h na.. Maya ko lgta h ki tum usse psnd krte ho aur hum date kr rhe h... Mai usse video call par baat nhi kr paa rhi jab usse hmare baare mein pta chlega she will freak out

Shivani maine usse ek moral support diya h buss mai aise bhi usse kch dino mein btane hi vala thi ki mai usse psnd nhi krta she is only my friend but mai uska bday spoil nhi krna chahta tha isiliye nhi btaya mai baat kruga usse.

Noo.. I think mai baat krti hu usse

Night time shivani & ritvik was sleeping when maya peeps in & shouts which broke there sleep.

How dare you shivani maine tujhe maaf kya kiya tu to phir se.... Chii get out of my house right now.

Maya meri baat sun.... Isme shivani ki koi glti nhi h mai tujse baat krne hi vala tha mai buss tera bday spoil nhi krna chahta tha....

Maya buss aaj raat ke liye mujhe yha rehne de mai kl subah hi chli jaaugi.... Aur ritvik kbhi bhi tune mujh par trust kiya h pyaar kiya h to let me go

She walks out of the room
Next morning shivani takes her luggage & went out in hall where maya was standing

Maya...... I know humne glt kiya tujhse ye baat discuss nhi krke par kya tera reaction yhi hota agar maine tujhe pehle bta diya hota.... I am sorry maya par tujhe bura naa lge sirf isiliye ritvik ne tere propose krne par tujhe naa nhi kha kyuki uss vakt tujhe support ki jarurat thi.... Par vo tujhse baat krne vala thaa aur tune jo raat ko kha ki i am that desperate to sleep with a man ki mujhe age gap ka bhi dhyan nhi h to Tu glt h pyaar wakt, din, age, rang, roop, caste dekhe bina buss ho jata h.... Shivani said & left with her luggage.

Ritvik was about to follow her but stopped by maya..

Maya plz... Mai pyaar krta hu shivani se i can't live without her... I know i did very much wrong with you but i am no intend to hurt you......

Saathi rey thoda thehar ja
Abhi raaste kuch badal se jaayenge
O saathi rey thoda thehar ja
Yeh paanv bhi ab sambhal se jaayenge

Ritvik was in lawn he kept trying her phome but it was not reachable. He throws his phone in frustration but again pick it up & cries loudly with hiccups over the photo of them.

Phir wohi barsaat hogi
Aur ashq saare dhul se jaayenge
Roshni din-raat hogi
Aur sab jharokhe khul se jaayege
By Arko Parvo from kapoor & sons

This all was witnessed by maya
Shivani & ritvik both was reminiscing thier moments which they spend together
Shiny afternoon
Maya come across cafe miranda & saw shivani outside she went near her... Shivani stands after seeing her

I am sorry shivani bina maine kch sune aur smjhe hi react kr diya i am so sorry.... I have a surprise for you...

She left the way & we saw ritvik there.
She takes ritvik 's hand & put it into shivani's hand.

Jab miya biwi dono razi to kya krega kaazi... Khush rho dono.

Ritvik hugs shivani tightly & the wind which started there lovestory again witnessed there reunion made her hair strands fall over her face which was tugged behind again by ritvik remarking thier bitter sweet journey.

It was the ending of ~
safar-e-mohabbat

Iss kahani mein dosti, pyaar sabke ek anokhe rang dikhe... Ek special love aur vo dosti mein takrar.
Mujhe pta h bhot se logo ko Maya ke sath jo hua vo glt lga ho.. Par love is not about forcing someone to get love... Maya ne smjhdaari ka kaam kiya shivani aur ritvik ko ek krne kyuki usse ye pta tha nahi vo khush rehne vali h iss rishte mein naahi ritvik.

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~tanya sinha
Writer: pyaar ka safar -e- mohabbat