🔪》Title, Cover, & Blurb

The title fits the story and it attracts readers. The cover is alright, I like the drawings on it. The title is very small and hard to read though. I suggest removing the book doodle at the top and making the title bigger. The blurb is very short and direct. It doesn't give much information about the characters and the plot.

🔪》Plot

The plot of the story needs to be clearer. I know it's a romance book, but I'm not sure exactly what the plot is. The plot is engaging though and what has happened so far is easy to understand. The plot seems very sweet and it definitely drew me in. The plot is progressing at a nice place as well. The exposition introduces the characters and the world very well.

🔪》Characters

The characters are introduced and described very well! The characters' personalities are also shown well throughout the chapters. I like how different all the characters are, especially Jacob and his friends. Jason is a terrible person and I hope he gets what's coming to him!

🔪》Grammar/Spelling

I did notice you missed an 'L' in Penellope's name at the end of chapter three. Other than that, I didn't notice any other spelling errors or any grammar errors.

🔪》Writing Style

The writing style is consistent throughout the chapters and it's very well done! You work information and descriptions into the story very well. It was very easy to picture the characters and everything in the story. You also worked the flashbacks into the story seamlessly. The chapters were a good length and the phrasing was easy to understand.

🔪》Enjoyment

The story was enjoyable and I would definitely read on! I want to see where Pip and Jacob's story goes. I really hope they do get together! They're adorable! Pip also really really needs to get away from Jason. Although, I'm sure Jason isn't going to give up easily.

🔪》Overall

Overall, the story is very enjoyable! The plot of the story needs to be clearer and the blurb needs to introduce the story better. However, the story is interesting and it draws readers in. The characters are also interesting and very likeable (although not Jason of course lol). I love your writing style! You introduce the characters and the world very well. The flashbacks are worked into the narration nicely and they provide good background information on the characters. The descriptions are also very well done. This story doesn't feel like you're new to writing romance. Good luck with your story!