🔪》Title, Cover, & Blurb

The title fits the story and it attracts readers. The cover is alright, it fits the story. The author name at the bottom is hard to read and the red color doesn't fit well with the cover. The title is a little dark and the font doesn't fit well with the vibe of the story. I suggest adding a black gradient at the bottom to help blend the models into the cover. The blurb introduces the main characters and the story well. It draws readers into the story and makes them want to read it. I really liked the quote you have at the beginning of the blurb!

🔪》Plot

The plot of the story is clear and easy to understand. It's also engaging, it hooks readers and makes them want to keep reading. The exposition introduces the characters and the world well. I knew something was off in the earlier chapters, but I couldn't decide who to trust and who not to. The turning point when you reveal exactly what type of person Warner is was very well done. I also liked the point when the Sisters of Stygian changed and supported Wren after what Warner did.

🔪》Characters

The characters are introduced and described very well. It was very easy to picture the characters' appearances. The characters' personalities are also shown well throughout the chapters. The characters are all complex as well and I enjoyed that you showed their good and bad sides. Warner was definitely too good to be true looking back, but unfortunately, that's often how it is.

🔪》Grammar/Spelling

There were a few spelling errors, but nothing major that distracted from the story.

🔪》Writing Style

The writing style was well done! My only suggestion is to add more descriptions of the scenery. There were descriptions of it in the chapters, however, I felt some parts could have used some descriptions. Information and descriptions were worked well into the chapters as well. You do a good job conveying emotion throughout the chapters. The chapters that are split in two, don't really need to be as the parts are pretty short.

🔪》Enjoyment

The story was enjoyable and I would definitely read on! I couldn't believe I had read up through chapter seven already. I'm interested in seeing where the story goes once everyone finds out that Warner has been murdered. I'm sure Mina is going to find out what really happened at some point as well. I'm also curious about how Aaron is going to react to Warner's death.

🔪》Overall

Overall, the plot is intriguing and the characters are interesting! The plot draws readers in and makes them want to keep reading to see what happens. The characters are well-thought-out and you show both sides of their personalities well. The characters' descriptions are also worked well into the story. Be sure to describe the scenery a bit more as well. Good luck with your story!