Ahemmm... after the loooong judging of fiction, I am taking a little rest. We had around 30 characters in this fiction story.
The main characters aka teachers are

Albus Dumbledore-
@hellofriend1231p
Cuthbert Brinns- G7_Nyoungie
Charity Burbage- SnFusion
Amycus Carrow- DogLovingfeminist
Alecto Carrow - Anisreadingmania
Argus Filch - SiaNord
Filius Flitwick - starringastraea
Thank you hellofriend1231p once again!
We also have some kpop fans and Hogwarts students here. Let me call the roll no. Ahem
Roll no.1 ,2,3.... 30.

Now the results in

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3rd place - Bad Boy Loves Chickflicks by Sanyyyy76 scoring52/60 in final round

2nd place- Royal Games by csutcliffebooks scoring 53/60 in final round

1st place - Let Me Find You - nutellaxgirlx scoring 54/60 in final round

Congratulations winnersss👏👏👏👏👏

Scores:

The clone -Bellareevesnew

Title = 3.5
Blurb= 3
First chapter= 9
Plot= 8
Grammar= 9
Writing skills=8
Enjoyment while reading= 8.5
Total= 49/60

Royal games -csutcliffebooks
Blurb= 4
First chapter= 9
Plot= 8.5
Grammar= 8
Writing skills=10
Enjoyment while reading= 9
Total= 52/60

Betrayal

Title = 3.5
Blurb= 2.5
First chapter= 8
Plot= 8
Grammar= 8.5
Writing skills=9
Enjoyment while reading= 8
Total= 47.5/60

The marriage contract @infinite_flame28

Title = 4
Blurb= 5
First chapter= 9.5
Plot= 10
Grammar= 8
Writing skills=8.5
Enjoyment while reading= 10
Total= 54.5/60

Meghan obmible hiraljadiya2

Title = 4
Blurb= 3
First chapter= 9
Plot= 8
Grammar= 7
Writing skills=7.5
Enjoyment while reading= 8.5
Total= 47/60

Melancholy of Heart - Ahseya_aye

     Title:  3/5

      Blurb:  4/5

     First chapter:  8/10

     Plot:  8/10

      Grammar:  9/10

     Writing skill:  7/10

.    Enjoyment while reading:   7/10

     Total =  46/60

   Review:

2. The book is so interesting with the catchy plot but it wrote that it inspired by the comments. I hope that the book has more original idea rather than use the comments to fix it. But overall, the book is good. The way the writer portrayed the feeling is amazing.

Heyy! I am @G7_Nyoungie and here are the results!!

1. Eye Candy, wasn't I? [K.NJ] - Jellycuddles19_

     Title: 2 /5

      Blurb:  3/5

     First chapter:  8/10

     Plot:  6/10

      Grammar: 8/10

     Writing skill:  7/10

.    Enjoyment while reading:   6/10

     Total =  40/60

   Review:

2. The first chapter is really good as the writer portrayed the feeling of the main character in a beautiful choice of words but as time goes by, the plot become too fast that I can't catch up nor understand it

Heyy! I am @G7_Nyoungie and here are the results!!

1.ESPEONAGE - Unknownverse123

     Title:  2/5

      Blurb:  4/5

     First chapter:  7/10

     Plot:  5/10

      Grammar:  6/10

     Writing skill:  6/10

.    Enjoyment while reading:   7/10

     Total =  37/60

   Review:

2. The book shows the readers how the human's desire is uncontrollable. The book is like the famous phrase 'human only appreciate what they have once they lose it'. It's really good but i hope the plot is more catchy.

Heyy! I am @G7_Nyoungie and here are the results!!

1. One Rainy Day - FantasyCreature123

     Title:  2/5

      Blurb:  2/5

     First chapter:  4/10

     Plot:  5/10

      Grammar:  6/10

     Writing skill:  6/10

.    Enjoyment while reading:   6/10

     Total =  31/60

   Review:

2. I hope the plot is more interesting because it become downwards at the first chapter.

Heyy! I am @G7_Nyoungie and here are the results!!

1. Entangled Fates - Rikara_sk

     Title:  2/5

      Blurb:  3/5

     First chapter:  4/10

     Plot:  4/10

      Grammar:  5/10

     Writing skill:  5/10

.    Enjoyment while reading:   5/10

     Total =  28/60

   Review:

. The character explanation is good with the writer's detail but the story isn't really.... Interesting.
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Story: Finding you --cosmicgalaxy-
My opinion about the story in general:
1-A wonderful introduction, she was able to present the characters in the story in an easy and clear way.
2-Her use of simple and easy words, and she has ease of expression as well.
3-The sequence of events is great, and the writing is organized.
4-Rarely if you find misspellings, or maybe her wonderful writing and interesting story won't allow you time to pay attention to the mistakes.
5-It seems through the comments that the readers are really enjoying, and this means that she was able to convey ideas and feelings to them, and that no one gets bored of reading it despite the length of one part of the story.
6-Her thoughts are enthusiastic, but she has to work more on the way each part of the story begins.
My opinion about the characters and events of the story:
1-In my view, the main character "Din" is dependable, adventurous and perhaps sacrificial. I also like that he is smart and affectionate with others, especially the child at the same time.
2-The idea of having a minor character, and making her a girl also "Cara", has a reason I like it. She is there to help him and this in itself is wonderful because it shows that a person always needs someone to guide him, and he needs help and advice as well, no matter how strong and intelligent he is. He's also a boy and the secondary character is a girl, which will help him think about things from different angles.
3-Din may take risks in the story sometimes, or face trouble, and someone has to stand by him and Cara has taken on this role and more, I loved her personality.
4-For the child, I wanted for a moment to break into the story to take care of him and help him, and perhaps relieve him as well. It is good that the writer did not forget him, but included him in the appropriate times that allow and help readers to imagine more.
Final review:
I didn't find many negatives as much as I found many positives. The writer is really talented and has a great talent for writing. I wish her good luck with all of my heart, and I'll support her too.
Title:  5/5
Blurb:  4/5
First chapter:  10/10
Plot:  9/10
Grammar:  9/10
Writing skill:  10/10
Enjoyment while reading:  10/10
Total:  57/60
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Story: Magnolia wishes - --yume

My opinion about the story in general:
1-A great and interesting introduction, the author made many points, which is good for later.
2-The sequence of events in the story is amazing, some of the events are funny and nice to me.
3-It's easy for the idea of writing this story to reach the readers who are reading it, I really got from just the introduction and that's great for me.
4-She uses the right words in the right place, and this is in fact a very beautiful talent, I hope that she continues and develops it as well.
5-I was amazed that the parts of the story were short, which made me want more.

My opinion about the characters and events of the story:
1-From my point of view, the main character "Magnolia" or "Maggie" is a very nice girl, and she represents what some of those of her age or situation face, as if the story wants to present the appropriate solution to this problem. I liked this thing as long as it solves an issue that some people are suffering from, and that is what increases my enthusiasm for reading it and delving into it more.

Final review:
1-She was able to describe the smallest details, such as the ages of the characters, and described them accurately, and this makes it easier for her readers to imagine more.
2-The author's introduction with which each section begins is really impressive.
3-She should just make the end of each part more interesting, I don't mean it's not good, but I just think it would be better if she put in some parts to get her readers more excited about following the rest.

Title:  5/5
Blurb:  4/5
First chapter:  10/10
Plot:  9/10
Grammar:  9/10
Writing skill:  10/10
Enjoyment while reading:  10/10
Total:  57/60
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Story: Dear Todoroki

My opinion about the story in general:
1-The introduction looks very good, it's definitely my type.
2-Speech, despite its shortness, is really expressive.
3-I didn't notice any wrong writing, typing correct.
4-The writing method is very attractive and exciting.

My opinion about the characters and events of the story:
1-Well, from my point of view of the main character “who is supposed to represent the reader who writes his/her diary” is a great idea and also tempting. It represents the reality of most girls or boys, whether from this age or before. I think the story has more of the good side than the negative. I liked that the writer focused on containing the parts of the story on many realistic scenes, and that of course would greatly help the reader to imagine it and deepen it in the details of the story.

Final review:
1-The fact that the story tells about one who suffers from the inability to disclose his feelings towards others to others, this in itself is wonderful and it may help some in choosing the most appropriate solution to deal with matters that are like this.
2-The writer excelled in the description, and this not only makes me assume the character, but rather makes me doubt that the writer has gone through this thing, as if she did not compose it and that it is only part of her reality, and this is evidence of the writer's ability to narrate.
3-I am really thankful that I have read this.

Title:  4/5
Blurb:  4/5
First chapter:  10/10
Plot:  10/10
Grammar:  8/10
Writing skill:  9/10
Enjoyment while reading:  10/10
Total:  55/60
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Story: Strong

My opinion about the story in general:
1-It seems from the introduction that the ending will be sad, but I hope the opposite.
2-I liked the writer's choice of characters, she chose each character in the story for the role that befits them.
3-There are comments that indicate readers' enthusiasm and satisfaction with the events of the story.
4-Just a few misspelled words while writing, but not a lot.
5-The sequence of events is great, the writer has the ability to choose the appropriate situation to stop and continue on other events.
My opinion about the characters and events of the story:
1-From my point of view of the story, the main characters "Harry" and "Kylie" have convincingly performed their roles, everything that readers need to know has already been written by the author and explained in advance, choosing Taylor to be the glamorous girl of beauty and extravagant to wear, but she will not get love From the main character "Harry" is a wonderful idea, close to reality, and in fact befitting it. As for "Kylie", she is the main girl in the story, which represents the role of most girls who fall in love with a character who, in their view, is difficult to have mutual love. Also the presence of the five members of "One Direction" is a lot on the hearts of readers, and I'm sure it really melts their hearts.
2-The writing is expressive, as I liked the narration of the story.
Final review:
1-I didn't feel like the story was fictional because of course I was so overwhelmed with its details that I am sure that most of the girls readers actually believed they were "Kylie" while reading the story with a lot of creative writing. The idea of the story is great for those who like this type of story.
2-I really wish the writer more success, and continue her writing career.

Title:  3/5
Blurb:  4/5
First chapter:  9/10
Plot:  8/10
Grammar:  9/10
Writing skill:  10/10
Enjoyment while reading:  10/10
Total:  53/60

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Story: The mysterious valley

My opinion about the story in general:
1-The start is really cool, I can feel really adventurous just reading it.
2-The writer explained everything in the first chapter of the story and before starting, which is good.
3-The writing method is beautiful, there are not many mistakes.
4-The narration method, and the beginning is wonderful and consistent.
5-The comments show how enjoyable the readers are, and this is positive about the right of the story.

My opinion about the characters and events of the story:
1-From my point of view of the story, having four main characters in the story is a wonderful thing and a good fit for the idea of the story. The fact that the idea is an adventure and quickly turns into obscurity. This is creativity and not everyone has the ability to create events that fit this.
2-The story revolves beautifully and harmoniously, never let you get tired of continuing reading.
Final review:
1-The writer really did well in her writing, maybe she just should vary in using her vocabulary more.
2-The story has great beginnings, but the ending is not interesting.
3-If the reader is not used to reading adventure stories, I would definitely advise him to read this first.

Title:  2/5
Blurb:  4/5
First chapter:  8/10
Plot:  9/10
Grammar:  9/10
Writing skill:  9/10
Enjoyment while reading:  10/10
Total:  51/60

1 Breaking Down
by -  Eveleft13

Title -  4/5
Blurb -  4/5
First chapter -  8/10
Plot -  9/10
Grammar -  9.5/10
Writing Skill -  9.5/10
Enjoyment -  8/10
Total -  52/60
Review - The title is good, I liked it. It goes hand in hand with some of the elements of  the plot and that's really why it is nice. The blurb is well written and by including the dialogues as a part of it and a tiny description of the main character was a nice idea.
The first chapter was written well, but it was a direct start of the story referring to some characteristics of the female protagonist. Hence, I would suggest you write a Prologue. Adding it always makes the audience get intrigued with the story, trying to figure out when this twist is going to happen. Grammatically your story was nice as I only spotted some errors here and there. An editing would be enough to spot them out.
The plot of the story is nice. The way you have depicted the female protagonist, an aim driven girl, that is, a girl who just wants to reach her aim of being a legend, of being famous, is nice. Everyone should have that drive. But, I like how you added the twist of how much trouble it can cause you in your life if you ain't take the right decision. The way you made her face troubles because of her thirst was remarkable. I really found the plot a mixture of emotions. But, I would suggest that if you would add a bit more of ornamental words, it would enhance the plot.
Overall the story was great. I had a new experience while reading it, as I hadn't ever read a book in which the female protagonists have this kind of character. In brief, good job.

2 Who Are You?
by -  @AshokaGrangerSnips
Blurb -  3/5
First chapter -  9/10
Plot -  9/10
Grammar -  9/10
Writing Skill -  9/10
Enjoyment -  8/10
Total -  52/60
Review - Let's start with the title, all I would say it is perfect for the story, as it matches with the plot. The people are trying to understand who Ashoka is, thus the name is perfect. The blurb is well written, but it isn't that eye catchy or intriguing. It just talks about the crossover and finish. In my opinion you should add a bit more to it, enhance it.
The first chapter or Prologue was well written. The way you describe her escape, her emotions and her encounter with the people of the other world, was awesome.
The plot is great. I loved how you have maintained the original storyline, adding some of your own twists in it. The character development is done very well. The blossoming friendship of her with the other characters was shown very well. I really like to find a female Harry Potter finally. Moreover, the way you expressed her emotions, about how she felt when she knew everything because of her abilities, yet couldn't do anything to stop or change them as they were bound to happen or she felt a bit too cowardly. And the one in which she remorsed cause her master was teaching someone else. The story didn't have much grammatical errors, great work. As for the writing skill, I would suggest you to use some ornamental words too. The language is too simple. Use of vocabulary can increase the interest in the story for sure.
Overall I would say this is one of the best crossover stories I have ever read. I enjoyed it reading and seriously, Zendaya is a perfect character for sure.

3 Let Me Find You
by -  nutellaxgirlx

Title -  5/5
Blurb -  4/5
First chapter -  8/10
Plot -  9/10
Grammar -  9.5/10
Writing Skill -  9/10
Enjoyment -  9/10
Total -  53.5/60
Review - The title is apt for the story. It clearly goes hand in hand with the plot, which has a key element of both the protagonists, the male and the female trying to find the person, whom the former is ordered to get and the latter is destined to be with.
I like your blurb, but in my opinion you could add up a bit more for making it a little more eye catchy and the cover is, to be honest, better than the previous one.
I would suggest you write a Prologue for your book. The first chapter clearly deals with only Auralyn and the intro of a few other characters. The plot is really great, and quite for sure will be better as the story continues. I really loved the love and hate relationships you have formed in between the various characters of your story, and the bookworm bro and Auralyn character sketch was something I enjoyed.The best part of your book that I would like to acknowledge is the way you have written it. There were very few grammatical errors and the cliffhangers were also in the right places, not too many or too less.
Overall, I enjoyed writing the story and you really have done a great job.

4 The Lies Hidden In Our Vows
by -  Namastae_SugaKookie

Title -  5/5
Blurb -  4/5
First chapter -  9/10
Plot -  9/10
Grammar -  8.5/10
Writing Skill -  8/10
Enjoyment -  9/10
Total -  52.5/60
Review - The title of the story is just perfect. It fits perfectly with the plot of your story. The blurb is great, it has the element of what one calls to be eye catchy. But, it could be a bit more improvised based on your storyline.
The Prologue or the first chapter was really well jolted down. It held the power of intriguing the audiences (the readers), as it compels them to pause for a while and think what must have happened that made the person who loves the other one so dearly, part her ways and leave the guy.
The plot is nicely written, but there are grammatical errors that you should check on. As for the writing style, it's good. I would suggest a few things in here. The way you are writing the dialogues. Use with quotations for the dialogues or the names. Apart from this you need to edit this mistake of yours, of replacing Y/N with Elyna in many places.
The character development and the way you have described each of them was nicely done and the cover of the book was really great, but I would suggest changing it as it focuses only on one of the characters rather than on the plot.
Overall the plot is great, you really did an awesome job. It is fun reading it.

5 MANAN BEAUTIFUL MONSTER
by -  kshamtasaini

Title -  3/5
Blurb -  3/5
First chapter -  9/10
Plot -  8/10
Grammar -  7/10
Writing Skill -  7/10
Enjoyment -  9/10
Total -  46/60
Review - Your story really has a nice plot. The title for the story, as in my opinion is nice but can be changed into something more. The blurb is too short and not that eye catchy. You should edit it and put some more crisp in it.
The plot, as I told in the beginning, is really great and in some places it had intrigued me to continue reading without coming to a halt. But, all these goes in vain cause of the grammatical errors. I would suggest that you do a thorough editing of the complete book. The way you write the dialogues, they were great too, but just suggestions. If you write in the form of quotes then it would be better. It would be easier for you to describe the feelings.
There are no points for these two categories but, I would like to say that, your book cover was really great. It went hand in hand with the content of the story. As for the character development, they were nicely done, but were in a shabby manner, in a few places. The thing is, I found it a bit hard at times to understand what that person likes. And for your future stories, I would suggest that you should segregate your characters beforehand into villains and heroes, this would already print an image in the mind of the audience (the readers) that this guy or girl means no good.
Overall, I love the book. It had all the elements. And the nicknames, they were just awesome and hilarious. As for the cliffhangers, they are well really written nicely, but I found there were too many and practically every time in the end of a chapter. Just reducing this as always adding cliffhangers, at times leads to loss of interest too.
Hope my review will help you a bit.

##The merciless contract killer @shubhamkandale

Title: (5/5)

Blurb: (4/5)

First chapter: (8/10)

Plot: (9/10)

Grammar: (8/10)

Writing skill: (8/10)

Enjoyment while reading: (7/10)

Total: (49/60)

##The dark makes me fade away​​​​​​​

Title: (5/5)

Blurb: (4/5)

First chapter: (7/10)

Plot: (9/10)

Grammar: (9/10)

Writing skill: (8/10)

Enjoyment while reading: (8/10)

Total: (50/60)

##Bad boy loves chickflicks -Sanyyyy76

Title: (5/5)

Blurb: (5/5)

First chapter: (10/10)

Plot: (10/10)

Grammar: (9/10)

Writing skill: (10/10)

Enjoyment while reading: (10/10)

Total: (59/60)

##Mutual Respect

Title: (5/5)

Blurb: (5/5)

First chapter: (9/10)

Plot: (10/10)

Grammar: (9/10)

Writing skill: (10/10)

Enjoyment while reading: (10/10)

Total: (58/60)

##Burnt Paiges

Title: (5/5)

Blurb: (5/5)

First chapter: (9/10)

Plot: (8/10)

Grammar: (9/10)

Writing skill: (10/10)

Enjoyment while reading: (8/10)

Total: (54/60)

Fiction:

Zog Mystical -daephnix 
title: 4/5
blurb: 4/5
first chap: 8/10
plot: 9/10
grammar: 10/10
writing skill: 9/10
enjoyment: 8/10
Overall: 51/60

Deception: It’s kinda Complicated – chocolate_drop_n_ice
title: 3/5
blurb: 3/5
first chap: 7/10
plot: 7/10
grammar: 8/10
writing skill: 7/10
enjoyment: 7/10
Overall: 42/60

Mystical Mutant - Kikibtsstan
title: 4/5
blurb: 3/5
first chap: 7/10
plot: 8/10
grammar: 8/10
writing skill: 7/10
enjoyment: 8/10
Overall: 45/60

Supermarket is a Cupid – @piano_staric
title: 4/5
blurb: 3/5
first chap: 8/10
plot: 7/10
grammar: 8/10
writing skill: 7/10
enjoyment: 7/10
Overall: 44/60

Kidnapped - yourlovabledreamer
title: 3/5
blurb: 4/5
first chap: 8/10
plot: 7/10
grammar: 8/10
writing skill: 7/10
enjoyment: 7/10
Overall: 44/60