Reviewer: AnnQueen5

Cover: Simple, overly photoshopped though.

Review: Okay, first off, I'm just gonna say that this is a good story. It's just that I am not totally sure about the world. The plotline is quite good, but the story does jump around a lot. It goes from a diary entry to a wedding to a multitude of other things, which makes the story hard to follow. Overall, an exciting read, but too confusing to be great.

Suggestions: I suggest that the author makes the story easier to follow. Stick to one main plotline and stick to that. Any decisions or events that happen in the story should make sense. Not just be put in the story in the second chapter! The story should make the readers interested to move on, not to have to re-read what they have just read to fully understand it.

Rating: 2.75 out of 5 stars