Reviewer: AnnQueen5

Cover: Good, could be better.

Review: I like the story, it's pretty good actually. The concept is decent, but I don't like the whole "Manik pretending Nandini's uncle" storyline. It's weird and honestly, sort of gross to be honest. The idea of a blood relative of yours being attracted to you in that way is frankly disgusting, and I think it's just not okay. Overall, good in grammar, but the storyline is unacceptable in my books.

Suggestions: Again, just a couple minor suggestions with descriptive writing and character development. The biggest issue I have with this story is the PLOTLINE. The idea of Manik being the uncle is so gross and just disgusting to me. It was painful to read the fake, almost incest. Anyways, I would have changed the story to have Nandini to moving in with another relative and somehow meeting Manik in the process. Just not the uncle incest thing.

Rating: 3 out of 5 stars