Shouri: Hello

Hey everyone! It's time for the Commentary Bonus Behind the Scene special chapter where me and one other Oc discuss what just happened three chapters ago!

Shouri: Today I'm joining Fox down this rabbit hole.

So Shouri, first off, we got a question for you. Are you really that much of an asshole in real life?

Shouri: Yes. I'm a cunt and still somehow Rick and Akane are my friends. Then again, Rick is just like "fuck it, I'm Canadian, I'm friends with everyone!" And Akane is sleeping half the time.

Woah, Rikishi's Canadian?!

Shouri: Apparently. You know those spit tube ancestry things? Rick did one and found out he's a quarter Canadian. Not even his own parents knew they were Canadian. Thought they were always Japanese. No wonder he did so well on French...

...so cool! No pun intended. Oh, Shouri, how do you spell your name in Kanji and what does it mean?

Shouri: Well, my name, Shouri Sakini, is written like this: 先に勝利 (Sakini Shouri) The Sakini surname part means "Ahead" and is written with に (Ni) and the "Saki" part is written with the Kanji for Ahead (先) (Saki) It feels a bit redundant to have Ni on the end when they both have the same meaning, but Shouri Saki doesn't roll off the tongue as nicely, plus it's my parents last name. I have no control over that.

Epic... What about Shouri?

Shouri: Ah, yes, Shouri, my first name. It's written with two kanji: 勝 (Ka) and 利 (Ki). Ka means "win" and Ki means "Advantage", so you'd think my name is Kaki. Wrong! Using Onyomi, the two Kanji together is read as Shouri. People often shorten my name down to "Sho", but when writing Sho in Kanji, they use 勝, but read it as Sho instead of Ka. Fun fact: Stick an Tsu at the end of Ka, and you get Katsu, which means win.

...okay, that's confusing. Now, onto our commentary!!

Prologue

Shouri: Okay, I'm sorry, but, Jesus Christ how edgy do I sound in that short paragraph?!

Very edgy.

Shouri: This protagonist is so edgy it hurts Jesus fucking Christ someone help this poor man

Can't help you Shouri... Sowwwy

Shouri: Fucking--

Huehuehuehuehuehuehue

Shouri: You're a fucking cunt, you know that? *activates Psyqualia*

Psyqualia can't save you!

Shouri: What?! You should be frozen!

I'm the author, I'm immune to everything you throw at me.

Shouri: ...

Opening

Shouri: Okay, I like this opening. Again, I look edgy.

*dancing to it* Hm? Didn't hear you

Shouri: ...

One day you'll have to sing it for us!

Shouri: Hello, other Authors out there, is it possible you can own me instead? This irresponsible Fox cannot take care of his own OCs.

OI DON'T ASK OTHERS TO TAKE CARE OF YOU!!

Shouri: I have Psyqualia and a fan made clan as a bonus.

You know people complain about Forbidden Chains right?

Shouri: You know what I say to them?

What?

Shouri: I'll meet you six o clock tonight

....?

Shouri: Fox, I thought you were a pervert

...but why six?

Shouri: Because 666 makes Satan appear

Okay?

Shouri: Nah jk, I just chose six as a random number. We'll meet at 4:20pm

Oh okay then, what're we doing?

Shouri: Weed, bitches, and gangster stuff

...

Ride 1: Dead End

Alright! The first proper chapter!

Shouri: Fun fact, the Fox based my issue of being made fun out of to him irl.

Well, yeah. That way it's easier to get into the mindset of the character. It's kinda hard for you to calm down aswell, isn't it?

Shouri: It's hard not to walk up to Darien and Nakuru and slam their faces into each other, making them kiss

Are you secretly a Yaoi Lover?

Shouri: No, it'd be embarrassing for them both. Plus, afterwards I can punch her straight in the face and not feel bad

...Okay.

Shouri: Anyways, background information makes why Dead End haunts me makes sense kinda. I mean, I get what you're trying to convey but like... I don't know.

Uh, I did the best I could?

Shouri: Cool

Ride 2: Chains

Shouri: I heard people called my deck op

I heard people don't like you

Shouri: I heard someone thinks Yza is a better protagonist then me

I think they called you a full of shit Psyqualia user?

Shouri: Eh, whatever. Think what they want, they're not the one with the power to basically change the tide of the game.

Woah, the arrogance is strong with this one

Shouri: So? A little bit of confidence isn't too bad

That confidence will be your downfall if you don't become humble.

Shouri: The humble old me was boring and tasteless. Not giving a fuck... That's the true me.

Wow, quote of the volume. "Not giving a fuck... That's the true me." ~ Shouri Sakini 2k17

Shouri: Anyways, I beat Rick in this match.

Yup, yup, that was good, even if you did overuse your Psyqualia.

Shouri: What, you want me to stop using it?

Yes!

Shouri: Look, having the choice to use this thing is why I love it so much. Of course I'm not gonna quit it. It's like drugs. Good shit.

Shoooooourrrriiiii

Shouri: What?

*sigh* You're so... You're so...

Shouri: Epic? I know

.....

Shouri: I loved putting Darien and Nakuru in their place aswell. Cunts, that's what they are.

Hypocrite, you're one yourself

Shouri: How so?

You're such a jackass to your own creator

Shouri: I know. But that doesn't mean I don't love you.

You're right, you hate me, don't you? :/

Shouri: Nah, I mildly dislike you

Welp.

Shouri: Mhm.

Ride 3: Psyqualia

Shouri: Fox Logic: Names the Ride Psyqualia, but no one uses it

Oops... Should've changed that to something like Golden Chains or something

Shouri: You messed up with that GP first stride

You mean Gurguit? Missed out that he was GB2. Sucks tbh

Shouri: That was dumb, even for your standards

I know... You can't blame me though. So tired that day ~_~

Shouri: Fights do take awhile to write, especially double checking effects... Which you somehow failed to do.

I know, I always check the effects...!!

Shouri: Haha.

Ayo was pretty nice wasn't he?

Shouri: Yeah. Although, I don't like the fact there's more Psyqualia users out there. There's seven more! SEVEN!

Code breaker warning: So it's you, Ayo, Human Bodypart and a Wild Cat, Rabbit, Elyk, Rino, Female Twin 1 and Female Twin 2?

Shouri: *spits out coffee* Fuck this shit find a new protagonist I'm out

NO SHOURI DON'T LEAVE

Shouri: LATER *disappears*

I'm all alone... *plays a small violin*

Shouri: Nevermind I'm back, you're my ride back home *enters back into the studio*

The fuck?

Shouri: You're my ride home

Oh yeah.

Shouri: Pass me a cookie.

*gives you one*

Shouri: Don't give it to the viewer. To me!

*gives Shouri one*

Shouri: Thank you. *eats*

The fight was interesting.

Shouri: Mhm, I gesh sho *munching on cookie*

And that's it.

Shouri: Really?

Yup.

CODEBREAKERS

New Character names!

Opposite of Yaoi!

Burn in (...)!

upcoming plot lines!

Ah fuck it, REVERSE TIMES BABY

Forbidden Chains

Idfk, new cards coming soon (:D)

That's all, FOX OUT!

Shouri: Baaaaai.