Solar Eclipse Draft 1 - This is the kind of layout I was kind of thinking of - I also just wanted your opinion real quick on a couple of things: so I'm using the casting that you put in the story, but there aren't many great photos so tell me if you would rather just better photos of the noncast people. I was also reading the book and I was kind of picking up on the fact that Amira might be a sun mage and her twin might be a moon, so I kind of ran with that, tell me if that's wrong, haha! Again, this is a draft, so it's not exactly finished yet, I'm still planning on adding more.

Solar Eclipse Draft 2 - This is kind of the same idea but using art rather than photos.

I'm also working on an all art-style one, so that might be something you're interested in. Let me know! 

Draft 3

Draft 4 (two options)

(only difference is the placement of the suns)

Draft 5

Sorry I couldn't do anything about the faces, but I did work on the fire and I thought the smoke would just add a nice touch :)