Undying by @XxxFantacion

The poems were very beautiful. I read 5 instead of 3 since they were so short.

Layout was good - it looked appealing on the page.

I think deeper meanings could be conveyed in the poems. Maybe explore other themes as well, not just love.

Grammar was sometimes off (you repeatedly didn't have a space after a full stop).

Overall, minor errors, but the poems were very enjoyable.

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