About That Sunday by @Lisamstu

Some dialogue problems like starting the dialogue tag with a capital and not having a comma at the end of the dialogue.

One case of repitition of words but I commented on that for you.

Good backstory of Jessica in the first part of the first chapter. It really gave us insight into her life.

You need commas before names.

The character of Jessica was very likeable and humorous which was great (because it takes a lot for me to like a character!)

Some good descriptions although more would have been appreciated.

There were some tense errors but they were so minor that I don't even think they were tense jumps.

Thoughts should be in italics.

Overall, a sweet romance story that really captured my heart.

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