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Title: A hundred roses.
Author: night_thinker9

Cover: I really don't like your cover. It looks like a simple sketch on a white paper, or a doodle on a piece of paper. It's simply too plain and doesn't convene your title. Not to be rude or anything but your cover actually looks a bit boring. I really think you should change your cover, 'cause it's definitely not eye-catching.

Title: I loved your title, and I have nothing to complain about it.

Summary: I really love your book description. It's simply enthralling.
"I know you fell in love with my petals, but honey, you know nothing about my thorns."
If this isn't captivating, I don't know what else is.

Based on ten chapters.

Flow and language: There's use of rhetorical questions and lots of simile. I really loved the chapter 'Dear John'
Honestly it brought tears to my eyes. It shows that as beautiful as love is, it can also hurt a lot when one is heartbroken. I also loved "Asking you to love me", it's a typical poem of unrequited best friend love. I love the chapter 'Love'. What I really loved about that chapter was this line 'Love is three letters, it's you.'
This chapter is the most suiting description of love. The poem is totally in my feelings.

Overall: I totally loved your poem. If I see love poem like yours, I'll be reading poetry every second of my life. I said I'll be reading just ten chapters, but oops!*smiles sheepishly*. I read all the chapters. Your poem is amazing.

What I liked.

*I love your simple language use to your nice flow. You write with such raw passion, like you have experienced true love, unrequited love and heartbreak. One can really see that your poems comes from your heart.

What I didn't like

* I really didn't like your cover at all. I will suggest you change it.

*Since I'm not really a poet, but as a one time minor in literature. Poems are to be in lines and stanzas, but chapters like 'Dear John', 'This is not a love letter", have taken the form of an essay. I don't really know if it's your style of writing.

Overall assessment: 9.5/10

I strongly recommend this book.

Thanks for requesting
Emma❤

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