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Book: Secret Desire
Author: Katewalker02

Cover: Your cover is okay. I think the feel I get from your cover is the one where you wish it could be better, but you can't just think of the perfect fit. I also think you can leave your present cover, but if you can see a much better cover that can really portray the love theme of your poem. It will definitely be cool.

Title: Your title is actually really nice. A bit cliche, but totally conveying the point. It gives the thought of either 'unrequited love' or 'secret love.' Definitely a wise pick!

Summary: Your summary is on a good level for a poetry book. It doesn't give out so much information that spoils the broth.
I really love this😉
"Desire is the starting point of all achievement, not a hope, not a wish, but a keen pulsating desire which transcends."

Flow and Language: I love your word usage. You really know how to weave them to your favor.
"Like a remedy, you were, as a trespasser
You crept into me, as a shield you stood,
protecting me."

You are officially getting me a prince charming.😂

This poem shows how wonderful loving or being loved by someone can be.

I adore this line so freaking much.
"I can't leave you... you are my life."

Overall: You know that awkward moment when you are reading something really romantic, and you have this crazy creepy smile on your face. Then everyone around you is wondering 'what the heck is she smiling at?" That's what exactly happened when I was reading your poem. I'm 100% in favor of your pen.
Good job👏

What I liked

*Your words! They were the bomb. Your poem is definitely engraved on my heart.

What I didn't like

*Nothing really. I think your cover could use a change though.

Overall assessment- 9.6/10.👏

I strongly recommend this book.
Thanks for requesting
Emma❤


P.s- Incase some people may be wondering if these books are actually horrible, and I'm just trying to sweeten things up.
Honestly I can never do that. If you check out these books, you will see they are actually great. If I read a bad book, I won't read for two days. Also all I will be doing is ranting about how stupid it was. Trust me it's not pretty thing.

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