Title: Magicae

Author: salenaRD

Cover: I love your cover. I basically have nothing to complain about it. It's super cute and definitely captivating.

Title: Your title is definitely awesome. Before I read your author's note, I was wondering what "Magicae" means. It's definitely not cliche and spikes up readers interest. You're going to leave everyone wondering what it means. I'm in favor of your title.

Summary: Your summary is actually good. The only thing I didn't like was asking of questions in your book description. Professionally in writing, as I actually heard. It is believed that asking of questions is lack of professionalism. I suggest you work on that.

Plot: I'm going to be totally honest as I always am. Your plot is kind of cliche, and it reminds me basically of most of most fantasy books. The whole 'teenagers' 'rise up to the occasion' 'stop the bad men' 'powers' and all that. It's pretty cool, but also overused.
Your saving grace is the diverse way you go about your plot. It makes it stand out among others.

CHAPTERS( I'll be doing this review based on the first ten chapters. Buckle up for the ride😀)

Your chapter one is definitely lacking. People usually complain about too much information dumped on readers in the first chapter, but this is basically no information at all. Your description is totally lacking and the chapter is literally so short. There is nothing interesting vague I can take from there. Chapter two is coming up, but it's still pretty much shallow.

You stated that this is pretty much your first book on wattpad. So I'll like to assume (please correct me if I am wrong), that this is your first fantasy book. One of the ways to actually improve or sharpen your writing skills, is by reading good books on the genre you want to write about. It really helps and I know lots of people actually agree with me.

I noticed another thing and I call it "words abridgement." Do not ever shorten your words, it's totally unprofessional. I used to have this problem, but a kind person actually pointed it out to me.
I noticed this in chapter six "But have fun. Learn lots, and make some friends, K" Do fix this as soon as possible.

Overall:

What I liked.

💖I liked the diversity in your plot. Even though it kind of seem cliche.
❤The title is pretty awesome.

What I didn't like.

🚫 Your summary. The only thing I didn't like was the question.

🚫Your first two chapters- I already explained why I didn't like it.

Overall assessment.(4.4/5)

I recommend this book, but I will love the writer to work on the first two chapters.

Thanks for requesting
Emma❤