Hey guyzzz so this is kinda short story which I started few days back.
Basically this is the modified sr version of abhimanyu track.
Actually the thing that irritated me the most was Swara saving Laksh despite being Raglak track.
I was like what the hell!?!
Its no mistake of Helly but directors and makers have made themselves so low in my eyes.....
So there will be no bashing for Swasan so that Swasan lovers may read this. But still I hate the character Swara and not Helly.
Helly is a sweet girl.
So no bashing for the actors but characters😂...
Moving on to the story......
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Swara and Sanskaar were shocked to see Laksh in front of their eyes.
They were rooted.

Laksh could feel their emmotions but stood unaffected. He knew why they were here. Controlling himself he said

"Who are they Mansi?"

Abhi you donated blood to their relative so they are here to thank you!"

"Oh no need...Afterall we all humans are made to help each other. So this was a lil effort... I hope she is fine now."

Laksh asked hopefully.

Sanskaar and Swara were more shocked. Sanskaar shouted:-

"What drama are you doing now Laksh? Why are you doing all this?"

"Laksh Ragini's this condition doesnt make you feel pity on her...She has lost all her hopes. I cannot see her like this.."

"Ms. What are you saying...I'm not able to understand anything? Who is Ragini and why are you calling me Laksh? I am Abhimanyu..."

Laksh said by keeping a big stone on his heart.

"No you are not Abhimanyu but my brother Laksh...come with us....come to your Ragini Laksh...she is dieing...She has died every moment without you Laksh....Why are you doing this to her?
Whats her mistake? To love you unconditionally? What has she done? tell me dammit! You again broke her...
We know you are Laksh!!! You know what!! She has lost her hope to fight to live...She can be saved but she is not willing to live! This is all because of you!!!!! Doctors have asked us to talk to her, to motivate her but no!! She wants to die....she is adamant....You have done a sin by destroying a life of a woman!!!! And that woman who loved you more than anything else...."

"Calm down Sanskaar!!"

"No Swara! Let me speak! Ya where I was! There she is dieing and here you married another woman and you are living with her.Chiii!! Thank god she hasnt seen you otherwise she would have died at that very moment......"

Laksh remembers her broken face when he offered her money.....He remembers her saying she 'll not come back! Everything is flashing in his mind. Tears are rolling but he wipes them off before any body can notice. His heart is bleeding.

"Abhi are they saying about that draamebaaz woman who yesterday came here ! Oh god full family is filled of draamebaaz!!!"

Sanskaar and Swara register her words. They get a hell shock once again.

"She came here!"

"Oh god! Now I came to know why she doesn't wanna live!! We came here to thank you but tables have turned.....
Don't come near her !! She is nothing to you from now...... Nothing....There is no Laksh for Ragini and no Ragini for Laksh!!!! Ragini Laksh Maheshwari doesn't exist now......It's Ragini Gadodia from now !! Come on Swara let's move from here.....You are dead for us Mr. LAKSH MAHESHWARI!!! AM SORRY Mr. ABHIMANYU KHANNA!! Come Swara let's go from here....We have Ragini to look after. We have to motivate her to live for herself now and not for others. We have to remove a nightmare of her life which she loves the most..... Come!!"

They both storm off.

Laksh is standing there shocked .....
Tears are rolling from his eyes.
What he has done of his life?? What he has done to his love?? He is rooted there!!

He remembers his some moments with her........

His wedding night.........When he came to know the meaning of true love!

The jail scene. How his baccha cried seeing him in that condition. He came to know how love is expressed itself!!

The hospital scene....
where both shared their grievances and cried in each other's embrace.
He came to know how it feels when we share our pain with our loved ones!!

And finally the broken face of Ragini after seeing him with another woman!!
She was devastated. He is feeling guilty now.....He can sense how her accident must have taken place!! The thought only kills him......

Bg music plays

Ujdese lamhon ko aas teri
Zakhmi dilon ko hai pyaas teri

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hZRJAJSs9i0

Listen this with closed eyes and imagine all the above flashes...

He is broken now.....
He falls on his knees and shouts
Aaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrgggggggggghhh!

He is cursing his fate. He is cursing himself for Ragini's condition.
Nothing is important to her than her life. He remembers Sanskaar saying...

She has lost her hope to fight to live...She can be saved but she is not willing to live! This is all because of you!!!!! Doctors have asked us to talk to her, to motivate her but no!! She wants to die....she is adamant"

He decides something and his determined face is shown.

Laksh pov
What all is happening in my life? There is no doubt that I am being a fool! My family loves me a lot.....
I have to tell the truth to Ragini. I have to motivate her. Your Lakshya is living like a moving corpse Ragini!! There is not even a single second when I have not missed you....But these circumstanCes have made me separate from you....But now I have to find a solution......I cannot let you go away. You have to live for me Ragini....You have to live for Laksh....
Your Laksh.....Sanskaar was in ferocious mood......Will he forgive me? I doubted him!! How stupid I was!!! Why will he make me beaten? Oh god that past of ours was awful and even the present is...Just because of me....only me...But no! I have to make everything in its order....Should I talk to Mansi about this? Maybe She gives me some suggestions....Or should I keep to myself only?? God please show me the way!! I cannot reveal myself now.........or Can I! Aarrgghhh
I have to do something!

Pov ends...
And with this part ends.
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I am sorry for a short part..
But I am busy nowadays.....So..uhm..a short part...Well! What will Laksh do now?
Will Ragini survive?
Will she understand Laksh?
Will Sanskaar and Swara forgive Laksh?
Will Laksh take help from Mansi?
Is Mansi positive or negative?
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