CREDITS:

Plot-drafter: Mystery4Shadow

Reviewer/Editor: Bookscavengerrr

Characters: All Mystery4Shadow except Fenn (The Fern in this chapter is her character with the same name)

For the sake of simplicity since Fern and Fenn looks quite similar, I'll use the name Foxpaw for Fenn

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Asteris: Woah! Where am I?

Fern: Lovely, a new dragon!

Foxpaw: Wtf- who is he *points at Fern*

Stardust: Cloud's boyfriend.

Foxpaw: HA, you're telling me the idiot got somebody who can actually sit next to him for three minutes without puking on his ugly ass face?

Stardust: . . . Fenn, we're kinda identical (?) twi--

Cloud: SAYS YOU MISS HAVING-A-SUGAR-RUSH-EVERY-MOMENT.

Asteris: H- hey, I don't mean to intrude but uh, I'm just wondering if I can leave now...

Fern: Not yet, Asteris *pulls her aside* YOU BETTER ANSWER MY QUESTIONS OR I'LL GROW A TREE OUT OF YOUR DIGESTIVE SYSTEM 💖

Asteris: *growls* F*ck off. 

Stardust: *smiles gently* Sorry about him *looks at paper* Asteris, is it? We're just doing a quick interview since your creator decided that you didn't have enough trauma as it is. 

Asteris: You know about my backstory? How I was sent off to the Rain Kingdom myself and *her face twists from harsh memories* had to fend for myself? 

Foxpaw: *smirks with mischief* Nope, we all just assumed you did because-- well, you've got some Darkstalker genetic sh*t going on, and SHEESH, almost every OC submitted has some sort of trauma.

Fern: Yeah, *sighs dramatically* so many dragons here.

Foxpaw: THIS IS LITERALLY YOUR FIRST DAY MR. SIMILAR-NAME-TO-MY-CANON-ONE.

Cloud: *furrows brow* Wait, how did you come here? According to my Book of Everybody's Dark Past 'cause animus magic is OP, it says you're from the Darkstalker Times. 

Asteris: Well, time tr--

Fern: *rolls his eyes while swinging his wings around Cloud* Clearly time travel, you big dummy. 

Asteris: HEY, that was supposed to be my awesome, dramatic line! 

Stardust: You can still tell us about your full backstory

Asteris: . . . I hate how much you're tempting me. I was born in the old Night Kingdom and everything was alright back then. . . peaceful. But after Darkstalker did his whole gut-show, NightWings fled. Whiteout told me to run. To run to the Rainforest Kingdom... I've fended for myself since then. 

Cloud: Wow... *writes down ideas on a book titled "Evil-Ideas GET YOUR HANDS OFF THIS FOXPAW. I KNOW YOU'RE TAKING IT.*

Foxpaw: Hey, look, Fern, your boyfriend has a diary.

Cloud: IT IS NOT A DIARY.

Fern: *smirks* Whatever you say, Cloud.

Stardust: *sniffles* It must've been hard for you Asteris... 

Asteris: ...It kinda was. . . but I mean, the RainWings had ipads so li-- (jk, jk. Not canon.)

Mystery4Shadow: 7.5/10. Semi-decent backstory not a lot of concept, kinda based character, but a good plot overall. Thank you for coming Asteris.

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6/10 for me. I think the backstory is interesting and the AUs are spiraling in my mind but for the personality, it was a bit vague and bland. I feel like all relatively "nice" OCs can have aggressive moments because absolutely no one is just kind (that'd be unrealistic.) 

So just having "kind" and "gentle" as a personality trait is pretty basic. In the end, I'm just saying you need more character traits. I had fun scripting out the dialogues though. Great help from Mystery4Shadow.