By DesireeRobertsAnfang

Title: Please refer to the previous review to get an idea of the title. I mean, this is book two of the saga.

Cover: I love the girl on the forefront! I also like that you stay consistent with the series' covers.

Blurb: Interesting. You choose to write in first person, compared to Apollo's Angel, where it was in third person. I like that you made it detailed, anyway.

Plot: This time, I went as far as Chapter 5, so I managed to delve more into Crystal's misadventures. She's a no-nonsense, badass girl who knows how to put people in her place. I also commend you for being consistent with some characters, settings and scenes compared to Book #1.

Grammar: Again, you have punctuation typos and even misspelled words (someone else pointed it out through inline comments). Perhaps you might want to edit the story altogether when it's done.

Overall rate: 8/10

Would I recommend reading this story? This story is part of the Fairy Godmother Inc. saga and can be read as a standalone. You don't need to read Apollo's Angel first, even though I highly recommend reading them in order.