Legends will undergo editing once I finish Flicker. This means that some of the things you've read here will be changed.

Here are some of the things I'm planning to chamge for the revision:

>Choice of words and sentence structure (I find my writing cringey especially in the first chapter)

>Cause of fire (Marshall is still gonna die in a fire, but it's not honna be a forest fire like I originally planned)

>Addition of Tuck, Ella, and Rex (Someone pointed this fact out to me and I thought, why not? I'm going to edit this book anyway)

>Order of death (The original plan for the deaths are Marshall, Rubble, Chase, Skye, Zuma, and Rocky, with Everest and Tracker somewhere in the middle. Of course, with the inclusion of three new pups, the order will have to change)

>Children and/or mates (OCs because they're needed in the story. I'll try to include them less and just focus on the main pups)

>Addition of conflict (So the story won't get too boring, or else you'll be reading some boring angst all throughout the story)

>Accuracy and consistency of details (I find some details inaccurate and inconsistent when I was rereading the book. I'll change that)

>Less POVs (This is the reason I stopped writing this in the first place. There were too many POVs and too little details to add. I'll just write about the POVs of the closest pups to the one who died and their respective owners)

Tell me if you want something else changed for the story and I'll consider them.

Thank you for reading this, and I hope you enjoy the revised one once I publish it.