8: Dark Veil

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A short horror novel by @chimmyfilter

Title:

It suits the story well and it's also not common so good job. 20/20

Cover:

The cover has everything a cover requires but the font in front should be more visible in my opinion, overall no complaints really. 19/20

Blurb:

I like how you mention the main character (Alice) and her daily life, that makes the reader want to click on the read button to know more about her. The cliffhanger you put at the end is nice and makes readers want to read so good job. 20/20

Plot:

I absolutely loved it, it's kinda like squid game how they give money for playing games. But you put it in your own way that it's so unique. Would recommend everyone to read this masterpiece of a book. 20/20

Writing Style:

No complaints just.. wow. One of your best works in my opinion. 15/15

Characters Self Growth:

Eh.. I feel like this isn't really necessary since it's a short story and only has four chapters. So it's kinda impossible for self growth. 8/15

Interest:

Overall good story and plot, kept me hooked until the end. You should make a second season. 5/5

Total:

No complaints to be honest a good book and would recommend everyone to read it, thank you for choosing me to review your book and have a good day/night.

100/100


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