Update: Just finished editing till Birthday Shock. If some parts of the story may not make sense, do bear with me. I will try my best to smoothen out everything.

For Birthday shock, I added a Ash Dawn conversation to make the plot less awkward. Also I make the commotion between Ash and Kenny a bit more realistic.

For Her Birthday, I did some minor changes

For Gary Knows, I have added the conversation between Dawn and Ash before they enter the house while Gary is inside.

After completing my first story for quite some time, I feel that now is the right time for me to edit this story for the better!

And one more thing! I will be adding one extra scene into this book. It won't be important but will be interesting to read xD
But thats when I complete all my edits :D