Here is a review for LunaPhoenixNero

My comments will be in bold

Basics and grounding / Character information

Alright so I'm slightly confused why you gave me some of this information twice but some more detailed then others but that's fine.

Now I'm going to tell you everything I tell anyone making a creepypasta character. They are meant to be scary. Your character's appearence doesn't scare me. She sounds like what a normal character would look like. Add some more scary physical traits. Also be careful with dyed hair because it's somewhat frowned upon in the fandom.

With her personality you need to add more detail. Personality should be at least a paragraph instead of just a few words because that way it gives us a lot more insight into how the character acts and how she is. Also all her traits fit into the same type of personality sector so add more complicated and tricky traits to make her more in depth and details.

Also add some more details to her hobbies and be careful with her allias because ones like that are pretty common.

Relationships

The romance bit is good, but you really need to add more detail to everything else. Like why is she enemies with Zalgo? What's her relationship like with her parents?
Stuff like that.
Backstory

Alright I'll be honest with you here, stories like this are scarily common in this fan base and they're not scary, which defeats the purpose of the story. You need more detail and explanation. How is she a shapeshifter? Why did she kill her parents? Does the shape-shifting effect her brain? You seriously need to sit down and plan out her entire Backstory in detail.

Other

You gotta explain why and how she's a shapeshifter and be careful not to make her too op. Put limits on her abilities.

Stats

Stats are balanced there's no issues here.

Extra

Careful portraying mental illnesses and do your research on them. There's a page in this book on them if you're looking for help.

Final thoughts
You really just need to sit down and figure everything out in order to get everything to run smoothly. Add a lot more detail and have her be a bit scarier aswell. Really just work on developing her further.

*My critiques are simply at your request and to help improve your character. It is not my intention to cause any offence and you, of course, do not have to listen to what I've said. This is all just a bit of fun and I apologise if I have done any kind of damage*