Title:
Being Loved

Author:
ahajnal

Review:

Cover was awesome portraying the characters in a blend. I guess you can be a graphic designer too.
The title was too good as I have something for short titles. I know I am weird XD.
Description was amazing, but it was too long. I would recommend you to shorten it but still it was giving amazing vibes to me.

First chapter was good. I liked the sweetness in this story but it would be good if you have described them in a more good way. The descriptions were short about their feelings.

Character development was not bad. I got to know a naughty Shravan behind a serious and woman hater. Pretty good job with these author!

The plot was good. Some flaws was there if you would have described the hardships it would have been the best.I guess if you would add some suspense or heartbreaks of the description you have given... like when the ML was taunting the FL while he knew he was in love.... That part if you had described then it would be just amazing! Because Romance is actually interesting when we know their sufferings.

Grammar was perfect. I liked that Hindi and English were balanced perfectly and in a wonderful way.

Rating: 4 out of 5.5

PS:
Everything I said was my opinion if I have said anything wrong then please forgive me!
And all the best of your future!❤️