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Name: Velocity

(Very cool name! This is the first time I've seen it used)

Gender: Non-binary AFAB (assigned female at birth)

(Cool)

Tribe(s): Skywing

(Okay)

Sexuality: Sapphic Greysexual

(Very cool, first time seeing this sexuality)

Personality: Caring, protective, closed off, socially awkward, artistic

(They could use a few more positive traits)

Backstory: They are an orphan born without fire, they don't know who their Firescales sibling is, as their parents threw them off a cliff, seeing Firescales as strong and No-fires as weak and useless. They were adopted by Altitude and Sunshine, a Skywing-Sandwing lesbian couple who started an orphanage in Possibility. Velocity hates their unknown birth parents and refuses to refer to them as that, seeing Altitude and Sunshine as their only parents, though they are curious as to who is their twin. They're 11 years old and love to help their moms at the orphanage. They're going to Glasswing Academy (my made-up WOF school) to get their education as soon as they can. They plan on being a healer in the future, to help sick dragons.

(Very interesting! Definitely well developed)

Abilities: Ashscales (no-fire)

(That's a cool name for dragons without fire very creative)

Likes: Hunting in the desert, flying

(They could use a few more likes)

Dislikes: Spiders, their birth parents, not being able to do anything

(Okay)

Other: Had a few crushes in their life, including Sunny, though they find Seawings as the most attractive

(Do you mean Sunny the cannon character? I'm generally curious)

You asked me to be as honest as possible, and I'll say I really like them! They might need a few more likes and positive personality traits, but I can definitely see the thought put behind them, 9½/10

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