This amazing book was written by KaylaLoluna

You know how much I admire you as a writer right? And how much I hate when u unpublish stuff, so imagine how upset I was when u unpublish the original book...and when you asked me to review the new book, I actually thought it was a new book :(

But I'm happy that you are back with it and I hope it stays!!

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I love your Summary, it gives a really good insight of the storyline and also leaves some suspense in the air which is always a plus when describing a book.

I LOVE Jessie, it's an awesome character, I can connect with your book straight from the beginning and Jessie has this image of strength and power, and still you make her going through so much more that is impossible not to like her as a character.

I love your writing style, I honestly think your hard work is paying off.

And is it me or the way you describing the story is more fun now? I love the "thoughts" of Jessie, and that was something I really liked the first time but for some reason I'm liking even more this time, you added more and I absolutely loved it.

I really like the storyline, I've told you so many times that you have an amazing plot, seriously it's original and Jessie's Character is just a blast of fun, the way you describe her is really good, I honestly don't think you could have it done any better because is perfect.

Yes you can edit and make the writing perfect, but you already have the most important thing...the plot works and that takes this book way ahead.

I only have 3 chapters to review (because someone deleted chapters) so is no much I can review at this point, I sincerely hope you keep writing it and no question in my mind that you will do great.

Just a little note, I loved the previous Book cover, I'm not sure if you would consider but I honestly think it was more mysterious and gave the book that little edge that Jessie has, also I think you should consider your first choice for the title.

Us writers sometimes worry too much about the number of reads or the amount of likes, I know it's a way of getting some feedback from readers, but do it for you, and sometimes takes time but I'm certain you will achieve great results in the end.

Now to finish this review, Kayla you are an amazing writer, what you need is to believe it yourself, you are holding back and it's normal to have some hesitation as a writer, but you have nothing to be afraid of because you have a great book, the plot is amazing, and I have seen big part of this book that is now gone!! So I can tell you it works!

Ohh and get away from the unpublish button!!

I wish you all the best :)
claudushka