Review #12: @ThisisGV

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Title: Tranquil- A Poetic Mess
Author: @ThisisGV
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   I honestly had an amazing time reading these poems. The blurb/summary is really amazingly written, it's a work of art in itself. Maybe try writing it as a poem, in stanzas, it'll be really appealing. The cover is great, but I feel like the author could use a much more serene background for it. The title is good, but I think the author should probably use a colon(:) instead of a dash/hyphen, or whatever they were going for initially.
Now the poems. I think it's amazing that the author didn't rush the emotions or feelings, nor did they try to have an excess of them. The author concentrated on one feeling at a time, eventually developing it into another. It is enticing, for a poem. I think the author should concentrate majourly on the grammar and proofreading. Also, some lines could be better worded. Like, instead of         
The light that could still be seen by her
The author could use something like:  The light still seen, by those (random                    adjective)eyes
Of course, every poet has their own style, but try to do your best to tweak different styles into your own.
In conclusion, your poems are actually nearly perfect.

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