Title: The Queen's Weakness
Author: @iKnow_imAwesome
Reviewer: CatLoverHope
Review:
   Let's start with the things the readers see first. The title is good, but I feel like there   
should be a slight variation to show some more of the teen fiction element to the readers.
Maybe 'The Queen Bee's Weakness', or something like that. It confirms greatly what
the story's plot is about. The cover is amazing, it really matches well with the story. The blurb is also good, but I feel like it's too stretched. It could be shorter, and just as informative. Also, some punctuation mistakes are seen.
Now let's look at the content of the book. The plot is very good and interesting. I think the main goal of the story could be worked on. Maybe, show how these experiences influence the lives and personalities of the characters, try to make it seem deep without much hard work or thinking. The author's writing style is also very good. The only thing I would suggest the author to do would be to add more relatable emotions to the main character. Also, the author should show the good girl's perspective too. The author doesn't need to add more POVs or anything, just show it with a few words from the character or something, make it creative and emotional. After all, every character has a good and a bad side, make sure to show that with the good girl and some of the side-characters too. I like the sudden open-relationship twist with two of the main characters friends too, it's really amazing and bittersweet. I would suggest doing more things like this and rub them in the readers faces a little, it'll make it better. I like the how the author tweaks the gradual build-up of the side-characters' life stories in the book. Maybe the author should try to show people's gradually-building dislike to the main character, and how she reacts to it. I think it would help with the 'relatable emotions' part a lot. I think the author would be great at cliffhangers, so maybe use them more.
The grammar is perfect. The arrangement of paragraphs could be worked on. More figures of speech would make the story beautiful.
In conclusion, this book has lots to be worked on, but has amazing potential.