Review #18: @Nasiim22

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Title: PERFECTLY, MAYBE
Author: @Nasiim22
Reviewer: CatLoverHope
Review:
Let's begin with what the readers see first. The title is good, I initially thought the caps weren't that good for the story, but they match interestingly well. The issue is, the word 'PERFECTLY' could've been replaced with 'PERFECT'. It makes more sense, that's the only reason. The cover is good, it really intrigued me. The blurb is good and interesting, but I feel like the caps in some of the sentences are unnecessary. Also, some grammar mistakes are seen. I think it would be way more interesting if the author didn't mention the events that happened in the book like them being fired from their job or the apartment event. It would add a more dramatic aspect to the story if this were to happen.

Now, let's look at the content of the book. The plot is clearly followed, and I see no plot holes. The thing is, I think this book is too fast-paced. This is the kind of story which should be a slow-burn romance. I really love the humour, writing style and everything, the only issue seems to be the one I mentioned before. Some minor things I noticed include lack of cliffhangers and hooks. These things really appeal to the readers.
The grammar is okay, a few mistakes here and there should be corrected though. I think the author should try using more figures of speech(metaphors, similes etc.). It really adds to the story.
In conclusion, this story has only little to be corrected to be better and really good. I'm really impressed by this book.

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