Review #46 : @_aankh_

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Book Name : Aagneya

Author : _aankh_


Reviewer :  GargiBorate

Review :
Loved the idea you are trying to portray here...
Obviously, no one except people who have gone through situations like these can only express what they go through when they are r*ped.

But you are trying really hard, and your effort shows.
I haven't yet read beyond Chapter 4, but I will definitely when I get the time.

But, the suspense that you are able to create is very good. Usually I am able to predict what the next thing in a book will be, but in this case I really can't.

Because the main incident is already depicted at the start of the book.

Since, I haven't read further yet, I really can't judge the title, and how it's related to the storyline. Of course, it's her name, but I think you have something in the plot, that may focus on that particular word specifically.

Now, to the mistakes, technically speaking, there are no specific mistakes except for one or two minor ones, but I personally think, that the construction of sentences can change a bit. It will help in presenting the scene before, more accurately.

That's all I guess.
Keep writing, and keep impressing :))

All the best for all your future endeavors. <3

Love,
Gargi.

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