Title: The Beginning of the Tragedy
Author: @marvelous_wonder
Reviewer: CatLoverHope
Review:

I was never really a fan of fanfics, until I began judging and review. It's truly a pleasure to get to know the author's perspective of things. I think the cover okay, but could be more interesting with another design. The title is intriguing, but for some reason I can't relate it to the story. Also, the blurb/summary was great at the beginning, but then I couldn't help but lose interest. Maybe make it a little shorter and more on point? Doesn't need too many changes, just a little bit of thinking.

Now, let's talk about the main content of the book. I think the plot is interesting. I really love the way the author portrays different sides of characters in a beautiful way. But, I think the author could also bring more interesting factors to the chapters if they gave the side characters a little bit of a mystery vibe, and just as many sides to them. I noticed that while I liked the book, I couldn't help but find it boring, in spite of it having the suspense factor.

I think this has to do with my previous point about side characters. Also, there are a few spelling mistakes here and there which could be corrected. The typos kind of ruin the whole gibe of the book. Also, I think this book could be much more interesting if the author tried taking their writing style to the next level.

What I mean is, try making the description of places, people etc. look more beautiful. Just arrange the words in a mysterious/spiritual kind of manner; most readers would love it. Don't drag things on though, that would make it boring.

In conclusion, and surprisingly(full offense to tv shows), I think this book has a lot of potential.