Title: Tempting the Fates

Author: @Brennaiswriting

Reviewer: CatLoverHope

Review:

Let's start with the things readers see first. The cover of the story is absolutely magnificent! One tip though, it could use a different filter to match the story even more. A bronze or gold tint would wonders. The title, as ironic as it sounds, is very tempting! It matches the story very well. It sounds breezy but has a hint of that thrill in it too! The blurb is equally, if not more amazing. The author has built the action component of it very well. I would say, though, that the part of be described more delicately: with more description of her feelings, et cetera. I also think the 'She and Hades' part be changed to something like 'Hades and she must.....' it builds the action more. I apologize if it seems like I'm nitpicking, but as a grammar obsessed person and an action enthusiast, it feels necessary point out.

Now let's get on with the content of the story in the form of chapters. The grammar, I must say, is perfect! It seems like you've a talent in arranging paragraphs, but I think you're doing it too systematically. Try to separate paragraphs when dialogues, a lot of information et cetera is there, it makes it easier and more appealing for the reader. The punctuations are also really good. I especially admire the author's description skills, they make the story so much more attractive!
The plot of the story might be generic to some, but the way the author has written it, I'm enthralled! This is coming from someone who's very selective in these genres.
I think the author could make the story even more interesting with more humour! It would be even more amazing than it is now!(how is that possible?? Seriously, author, your book's too awesome for its own good. It's making me like Hades and that's bad enough.) Also, I think Callie's character when with her father, is too nonchalant in a way. I think the author should describe her inner peace and happiness a little more, but not too much.
Special credits: The prologue is the definition of perfection! I was so mesmerized, I felt like I liked dudes and looked into Hades' eyes haha! I think the author used the perfect degree of aesthetic description along with Callie's feeling, it brought me in even though I wasn't familiar with her character. The degree of which the author uses this in normal chapters is perfect, but I think it should make more appearances, it would be so awesome.

Overall, I fell in love with this book. I'd been so bored with my library, I started watching dramas. But this book brought me back! It also taught me that I should clear my library and add more stories like yours😂

With all my dedication, this book, I consider: a hidden gem. Thank you so much for letting me discover the beauty that is Tempting the Fates.