Title: Around The Ring

Genre: One Shot

Author: varshni81

Judge: SaachiDudani

Cover/Title: The cover is basic. It could have been better honestly. In this generation, you can add a few more edits and stuffs. The title though is good. I like it. On point. It would be a 1.4/2 for me.

Description: I am super duper confused. The description feels like a roller coaster that just goes whoosh. Try to add some important dialogues in the description rather than just writing something for the sake of it. It would be a 0.2/1 for me.

Storyline: Number of words-ok. Grammatical errors/mistakes-very few. Flow of story-ok. It's a good story but I believe the script doesn't have that thing which makes me curious to read the further of it. I felt that lack of liveliness in it. Try if you can work on it. It would be 1.4/2 for me.

Total: 3/5

Book star: 3

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