Title: Glimmer of Hope

Genre: One Shot

Author: lost_soul7201

Judge: SaachiDudani

Cover/Title: Honestly, I'm in love with the title. The linguistic side of me is glimmering. But with the cover, I feel, a lot of things are happening in it. And the colour tone is suppose to be bright(shiny) and I feel it's a bit dark. It would be a 1.4/2 for me.

Description: The description is perfect with the given number of words. I love the quote that you added in the start. Quotes are always attractive. And as a reader, I got the inquisitiveness to read your story when the description got divided in two scenes. But I had some confusion about the two men you're talking about in the description. I later realised they're not the same. You should change that accordingly. It would be 0.8/1 for me.

Storyline: It is very brave of you to write a story like this. A lot of women are scared to talk about feminism feeling that what if they say something and it is interpreted something else. Also, I feel that there are some parts in the story that weren't as you know like, the ones that give the reader a feeling, "Oh! Aage kya hoga?". I felt some scenes just got stretched while other scenes were described beautifully. It would be a 1.6/2 for me.

Total:3.8/5

Book star:4

Wish you luck, love and peace.