Title: Promise

Genre: One Shot

Author: 000_aamira

Judge: SaachiDudani

Cover/Title: The cover is appreciative. There is a story going on in the cover that makes me curious. The title, however, I feel could've been better. I don't think there's a need to mention Manan. You don't have a story with the same name. It would be a 1.4/2 for me.

Description: Honestly, I've no idea what to say about the description. It's nice that the story has been personally connected to you but that's not how a description is like. You can improve it girl! It would be a 0.3/1 for me.

Storyline: The thought behind the story is wonderful but common. I felt that to story went a bit too fast and there are uses of shortforms in the story and a few grammatical errors. I think that if you give an update, if you write it again, it's going to turn out great. It would be a 1/2 for me.

Total: 2.7/5

Wish you luck, love and peace.

Book star:3