Title: Their love

Genre: One Shot

Author: monu2525

Judge: SaachiDudani

Cover/Title: The cover is peaceful. That's what it is. Just very calming. I loved it. The title though is too common. I think for a story like this, you can find a better title. It would hence be a 1.5/2 for me.

Description: It's a bit too short. A glimpse of the story could have been better for the description. Hence, it is a 0.3/1 for me.

Storyline: The story was very unexpected for me. For me, if the story is not going with the pace of my life, I don't actually prefer reading it but the way you portrayed the emotions and feelings in the story, I totally loved it. The only point that gets negative is the fact that there were grammatical errors and some spelling mistakes. Otherwise, I like the story. It would be a 1.4/2 for me.

Total:3.2/5

Wish you luck, love and peace.

Book star: 3