Author : taetae_sumo_04

Reviewer : Daydreamer_Jhope

GHASTLY

Cover (9/10)

It is relevant in the story. The cover is clean but it's too dark. It is an eye-catching cover because this makes to increases the number of readers in the story.

Title (4/5)

The title is scary. I heard the name and I feel cringed about myself. It is pertinent in the story.

Synopsis (0/10)

There is nothing in the description so I can't review it, that's all I can say. Please add something in the description so readers can at least have a little idea about the story.

Plot (28.5/30)

The first chapters made me want to indulge i the plot more and continue reading the story. The flow of the plot was a bit smooth. The story doesn't have a climax to get the readers more excited and anxious about the story. There are no prominent plot holes that I didn't found in the story. It is a cliche but there is no unique plot. Yes, the scenes are relevant in the story. Yes, the scenes are well transitioned.

Characters (8 /10)

The character's in the individual stories made me feel weird. The emotions and relations were understandable and identifiable. The characters are well presented in the story. The characters are bit realistic in the story.

Grammar (23/25)

There are not too many grammatical errors that made me lose focus on the story. The tenses are linear and the and the author didn't switch between the tenses. The punctuation marks are well placed and also well used.

Overall

I recommended this story but I have to be alert while recommending because they give me alert that when I will read this I will feel paralyzed. Yes, If it's an ongoing book I will keep reading as a reader, not a judge. The author was not interactive and they leave notes but did not reply to the readers' comments.

Review Scores :  72.5/100

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