Name-Shademask

Excellent name! I've only seen it once or twice, so good job :3

Age-27 moons (still a young warrior)

Thanks for specifying (^.^)

Gender-female (I know it's overused but still :P)

It's okay.

Sexuality- straight

Clan-ShadowClan

YAY :D

Rank-Warrior

Personality-She is extremely brave, but also very reckless. Don't argue with her, because once she believes something it takes a lot to change her mind. (Once she argued with the medicine cat about where to find herbs). She will speak her mind, and won't bother sugarcoating her words. This makes it seem rude at times. After what happened to her sister, she became insanely protective of her friends. She doesn't like to show when she is scared or hurt because she feels raft she has to be brave all of the time.

This is an impressive personality! Two paw-toes up from me :3

Backstory-Her story begins before she was born. First of all, her parents were from two different clans. Her mom was from ShadowClan, while her dad was from WindClan. One day at a gathering, they bumped into each other. After talking, they decided they would meet along the border. After doing so for many moons, her mom became pregnant. She didn't tell anyone that the father was from a different Clan. Soon, Shademask and two other siblings were born. Shademask was a lively kit. She convinced her siblings to sneak out at night, and go try and play with the leader. Let's just say they got in big trouble. Even after that, she would still go on her adventures'. When Shademask was an apprentice, she convinced her sister, Furzepaw to go out with her. They were prancing about when Furzepaw said that she smelled something nearby. Suddenly, a fox burst out in front of them. Frightened, they both took off towards camp. Furzepaw tripped, and the fox started tearing into her. Shadepaw kept going to camp to get help. By the time they made it back, Furzepaw was dead, and the fox was gone. When she was a warrior, she grew to fall in love with a cat named Oakshade. Her rival also loved him. Oakshade ended up choosing her rival instead of her. Two nights later, her rival, Applefall, was found dead. A little tuft of black fur was in between her claws. Oakshade, believing it was Shademask, accused her of murdering Applefall. Shademask denied this, but one by one the other cats grew to believe it was her. She was cast out of the clan. Eventually, she wandered near the lake. When she was staring into the water, she felt herself being shoved from behind. She tells into the water, and strong paws held her down. She struggled, but no matter how hard she tries, she couldn't escape. As she felt herself drifting off, the paws disappeared and she was hauled out of the water. It was her brother who had saved her. Nearby, was a pure black cat who was bleeding heavily from a wound. This cat was never caught, but the Clan now knew that Shademask wasn't the murderer. She was accepted into the Clan, but still currently lives in fear. She and another cat fell in love, but they aren't mates yet.'

THIS WAS SPECTACULAR! You didn't just make good things happen to her, and made constant obstacles that she overcame eventually! I especially loved how you made her live in fear afterward. Just one thing- who is the cat that she fell in love with now?

Mate-none

Crush-Flarewhisper

Beautiful name :3 And that answers my question above.

Kits-none

Mother-Addertooth-a black and brown she-cat with Amber eyes.

Father-Breezerunner-A lithe white and tan tom with green eyes.

Siblings-Furzepaw-A Black and Tan she-cat with Amber eyes. (Deceased)

Owlfeather-A lithe tan tom with green eyes.

These are all pretty names.

Other-none

Appearance-A black and white she-cat with a black 'mask' around her green eyes. She is lithe and has short fur, and has a scar going across her muzzle. Her right ear is nicked. One front law is black; the others are white.

This appearance is overused. Many WC OC makers go for black-and-white-with-green-eyes. To make up for that, you specified the 'mask' around her eyes. Good job for that one.

Overall Rating: 9.9/10

You lost that little .1 because of the overused coloring. Everything else was spot-on! Good job.