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1. Small Paws , Big Pride by TheWorldArtistBooks

Title: 8 /10

Cover: 8 /10

Blurb: 7 /10

Plot: 12/15

Creativity:11/15

Grammar: 15/15

Characters: 4/5

Interaction with the reader: 4/5

Overall: 14/15

Total: 83 /100

Review: The story is interesting because it shows how the wolves and the girl are connected. The author is good at expressing the characters' feelings and what happens in the story, there is no grammatical errors which is spectacular. I liked it. Also, the author's writing style is great, and the author uses sophisticated words well. Maybe a few changes to the story could make it even better, but it's still awesome. The title and the cover are creative and make the story more captivating for the readers.


2. Against All Odds by WyattVision

Title: 9/10

Cover: 8 /10

Blurb: 8/10

Plot: 14 /15

Creativity: 13 /15

Grammar: 13/15

Characters: 4/5

Interaction with the reader: 4/5

Overall: 14 /15

Total: 87 /100

Review: This story is remarkable. I enjoyed the plot, which is rich in morals. It was captivating to see how Jason overcomes obstacles to become skilled and ultimately a boxer due to an homeless man. The language is well crafted, with only a few minor errors. The title aptly reflects the essence of the story, which is highlighting with valuable lessons. Overall, this story is truly exceptional.


3.Sea Gypsies: The Draga Isles by HeideHunt

Title: 9 /10

Cover: 9/10

Blurb: 8 /10

Plot: 13 /15

Creativity: 15/15

Grammar: 13/15

Characters: 4 /5

Interaction with the reader: 4/5

Overall: 14/15

Total: 89/100

Review: After reading a few chapters, I'm truly impressed. The writer's creativity is truly remarkable in portraying how Ria's life unfolds during her search for the document to find her parents and where they are living. There's a lot of adventure, ideas, plots, and unexpected turns that keep things engaging. Everything seems to align perfectly with the title and cover. However, some improvements in the writing style, like the order of events, could make it even better. Overall, I find this story to be truly inspirational.


4.Emeralds and Enemies by Alpraed

Title: 10 /10

Cover: 7/10

Blurb: 8 /10

Plot: 14 /15

Creativity: 12/15

Grammar: 15/15

Characters: 3 /5

Interaction with the reader: 3 /5

Overall: 13 /15

Total: 85 /100

Review: This story is good. Firstly, I'd like to highlight the author's use of sophisticated vocabulary. The words are powerful, indicating the writer's strong grasp of grammar, which is why I gave it full marks. Next, the story-line is enjoyable, despite a few errors. I particularly liked how the officer is determined. Overall, it was a good one by reading few chapters which was very long. However, there could have been more interaction with the reader, but I still loved it.


5.Bad Wolves - A Grimmhold Tale by BellOfSilence

Title: 10/10

Cover: 10 /10

Blurb: 10 /10

Plot: 14.5 /15

Creativity: 14 /15

Grammar: 12.5/15

Characters: 4 /5

Interaction with the reader: 4 /5

Overall: 14 /15

Total: 93 /100

Review: In my opinion, this one is truly special. The story-line is amazing, and I admire how Scarlett is portrayed as strong and bold. The character names and everything else are just perfect. I enjoyed the story immensely; it's simply amazing. The author is very good at expressing scenery. Despite a few grammatical errors, the narrative of overcoming odds and growing stronger while being alone is truly inspiring. I really loved this story. The cover is captivating, and the interaction with the reader is quite engaging.


6.The Nanny by ONE_H_

Title: 7 /10

Cover: 8 /10

Blurb: 7.5 /10

Plot: 12 /15

Creativity: 10 /15

Grammar: 11 /15

Characters: 2 /5

Interaction with the reader: 3 /5

Overall: 10/15

Total: 70.5/100

Review: The Nanny story is good, but in my opinion, there are quite a few grammatical errors. As I read the first few chapters, I found the plot and creativity to be impressive, especially how Harida tackles her problems and searches for a job. I enjoyed the story-line, but the writing style could use some improvement. Overall, it was a good read.


7.Calamity of Chicago by ZapZac27

Title: 10 /10

Cover: 10/10

Blurb: 7 /10

Plot: 13/15

Creativity: 12 /15

Grammar: 10 /15

Characters: 4/5

Interaction with the reader: 3 /5

Overall: 12/15

Total: 75/100

Review: I liked reading "The Calamity of Chicago," even though the language was simple. The story shows how Laurence tries to protect people, even with some limited plots. But it could be even better with more interesting ideas. Still, I really enjoyed it.


8. Bound by Deception by romance_lover16

Title - 8/10

Cover - 10/10

Blurb - 9/10

Plot - 12/15

Creativity - 11/15

Grammar - 12/15

Characters - 4/5

Interaction with reader - 4/5

Overall -  11/15

Total: 81/100

Review: I'm keen on finding out the main characters' backstories and their potential traumas. That is, I like how the main characters are realistic. You've done great in setting the premise and the supporting cast. The way you sneak in humor in an action drama is really good and I'm curious to know what this story entails. 


9. Wings of Light by NxnsxgnorsDxmon

Title - 7 /10

Cover - 6 /10

Blurb - 7/10

Plot - 10/15

Creativity - 8/15

Grammar - 10/15

Characters - 3.5/5

Interaction with reader - 3/5

Overall -  8/15

Total: 62.5 /100

Review: I'm clueless...I don't know what to expect in this story. I think this would be a psychological thriller, like stated in the blurb (the blurb needs to be edited, so as to garner attention), but the pacing is a bit slow for one. You've stated the stakes in Chapter 1, but I'm confused by how that hasn't affected the next four chapters in a way.

While you've developed realistic characters (and their horrible traumas), there are quite a few errors in grammar (run-on sentences) that hinder my understanding of them. I know they were from the church, but to be reminded of it each time (the former holy woman) is a bit annoying. Same goes for the age, nationality and appearance of the person in focus.


10. The Black Sanctum by tifari

Title - 9/10

Cover - 8.5/10

Blurb - 9/10

Plot -  10/15

Creativity -  10/15

Grammar - 12/15

Characters - 3.5/5

Interaction with reader - 3.5/5

Overall - 12/15

Total: 77.5/100

Review: The premise is really interesting, and although I find the pacing to be a bit slow, the main cast and the world they live in is properly introduced. I'm glad to say this allowed me to bond with them before the big bad catastrophe sneaks in. And, I already have my bets on who this story's antagonists and Toni's future lover will be.


══════・❃・WINNERS・❃・══════

First Position - Bad Wolves - A Grimmhold Tale by BellOfSilence

Second PositionSea Gypsies: The Draga Isles by HeideHunt

Third Position - Against All Odds by WyattVision

══════・❃・CONGRATS・❃・══════

Thank you everyone for your cooperation and also a special thanks to MsOnirique and RookWri78 for judging this genre!

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