📢✅ Breaking News: The Science Fiction Winners Have Been Selected!

Attention everyone! Prepare yourself for the announcement of our winners 🌟 We've finally arrived at the moment you've all been waiting for - the winning authors of The Fabulous Writer Awards have been chosen!

"Drumroll, please! 🥁🥁🥁

The winners of the Science Fiction of the Fabulous Writer Awards are here to claim their rightful place in the spotlight. These incredible and talented writers have amazed us all with their stories and their unique ability to transport us to different worlds.

And a very special thanks to Judge Wlahus for judging all the fabulous books.

Now, time to announce our winners!!!

The book that secured Third place is...

The Story of a Pirate AdmiralFisher

Scorecard:

Cover: [10/10)
I read it; even based on the cover, we know what to expect.
Title: [7/10]
The title is too general.
Writing Style: [8/10]
The story is well told and understandable, and the events are easy to follow. There are too many short sentences, and the wording is too concise.
Storyline: (9/10)
The story is exciting and engaging; I would read on.
Grammar: [10/10]
I didn't find anything outstanding.
Character: [10/10]
The protagonist is very well described, we know his thoughts and his feelings.
Enjoyment: [9/10]
Despite the concise wording, I enjoyed reading it.
Overall: [8/10]
Total: [71/80]

Feedback: Firstly, let me congratulate you; the world you created is extraordinary. The description of the number and locations of different vending machines felt a bit strange, but after a while, I could get used to your style. I found the style a bit absurd, and I don't know if this was intentional. In any case, I enjoyed reading it; keep it up!

The book that secured second place is...

Uglier by JankyFluffy

Scorecard:

Cover: [9/10)
The title and the author's name are visible. The cover triggered a slightly uneasy feeling in me, but that's just my opinion.
Title: [10/10]
The title is fitting, a very good choice.
Writing Style: [9/10]
The author's style is very distinct, clearly conveying the message.
Storyline: (10/10)
Interesting storytelling, but it quickly grabs you, and I'm curious about what happens next.
Grammar: [10/10]
There's nothing to mention.
Character: [10/10]
It's not overloaded with too much information, but from the dialogues, and reactions, we learn everything important about them.
Enjoyment: [9/10]
I want to read it because I'm curious about the end of the story.
Overall: [9/10]
Total: [76/80]

Feedback: This is a very well-written piece reflecting on social issues; very cleverly done. I can only congratulate you. Sometimes I couldn't figure out who was who while reading, but the cast list helped a lot.

And now the book that secured first place is...

Is...

Ashes by Xeno-Hollow

Scorecard:

Cover: [10/10)
I loved the dystopian atmosphere of the cover.
Title: [10/10]
A good choice.
Writing Style: [10/10]
Very easy to follow.
Storyline: (10/10)
Kept my interest throughout
Grammar: [10/10]
Nothing to mention.
Character: [10/10]
Very well-developed protagonist.
Enjoyment: [9/10]
Despite the sometimes uncomfortable topic, I enjoyed reading it.
Overall: [10/10]
Total: [79/80]

Feedback:All the information is not given all at once, we learn it as we are introduced to a new thing. Worldbuilding is done quite well, and the protagonist is so well written, the amount of details is ok. I did not find anything I could clear out as an issue enjoyed the entire process of reading it.
One of the best novels I've read here. The landscape descriptions, and in general, the depictions are very expressive. I admire how you weave your thoughts together; your vocabulary is impressive. I'm sure there's a lot of work behind being able to convey the story so convincingly. Very good writing, congratulations!

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Now, it's time to announce the books that secured the fourth, fifth and sixth place in this award. Don't be discouraged because your books didn't win. Your book is great, you just need to make some improvements.

The book that secured Fourth place is...

The Irangel by IredescentRose

Scorecard:

Cover: [10/10) The cover is extremely colourful and attention-grabbing, I liked it.
Title: [10/10]
"What is Irangel?" makes it intriguing; it's a good choice for the title.
Writing Style: [10/10]
It's easy to follow; it's clear what it's about.
Storyline: (5/10)
I think it's not fortunate to start with the protagonist's childhood and dump a large amount of information on the reader.
Grammar: [10/10]
I didn't find any mistakes.
Character: [5/10]
I missed the protagonist's feelings. We know she's super rich and super sexy, but I don't know what she feels. What drives her, why is she such a ruthless killer?
Enjoyment: [5/10]
The story is very interesting; I'm curious about who these Irangels are. The fact that the protagonist kills everyone because there can't be witnesses seems to come out of nowhere. I got a bit confused because I didn't feel like this was necessary. How does he know if these prints are real?
Overall: [7/10]
Total: [62/80]

Feedback: If I had written the story, I wouldn't start with the protagonist's childhood but, for example, with when she finds the evidence, and later I would dose the background story. I would put much more energy into explaining why finding the Iridescent planet is so important to her. Apart from these, I think you wrote it very well; your imagination is wonderful, keep it up!

The book that secured fifth place is...

Is it true? by kth_disneyfanatic

Scorecard:

Cover: [7/10)
The title and the author's name are clear, but the visibility of the subtitle is problematic. The cover didn't catch my attention; it's nothing special.
Title: [7/10]
The title is attention-grabbing because it is a question, but it gives a neutral feeling.
Writing Style: [9/10]
It was easy to follow the events; it's clear what it's about.
Storyline: (7/10)
The story was exciting; I kept reading, but there were some strange things…
Grammar: [10/10]
I didn't find anything objectionable.
Character: [4/10]
In these first four chapters, not much is revealed about Tiki, and the other characters are also very vaguely presented.
Enjoyment: [6/10]
Some peculiarities bothered me, and you pointed them out at the beginning, but it's hard to overlook them while reading. I enjoyed it because it's a kind story.
Overall: [7/10]
Total: [57/80]

Feedback: If I had written the story, I wouldn't have placed Tiki on Jupiter but in another solar sys system format. formulae hear the buzzing sound and decide to order a spaceship, there would need to be a much more decisive reason. There are too many "maybes" in that paragraph. Apart from these, it's an interesting story, and I'm curious about the meeting of Tiki and Marinda.

The book that secured sixth place is...

Lily's Warrior King by Girlygirl8821

Scorecard:

Cover: [8/10)
The title and the author's name are visible, and the colours on the cover are marvellous like the subtle greenish shade. However, how does this cover suggest that this novel is science fiction? This is what I missed.
Title: [7/10]
I would rather give this title to a romantic novel.
Writing Style: [4/10]
I think this is a draft. The writer wrote down all the thoughts that came to mind. It is not decided who the narrator is. Within a chapter, we see events from Lily's or Alistir's perspective. But sometimes it switches to the third person. This is extremely confusing and uncomfortable for the reader. I also have problems with the segmentation; it's too cluttered. Please put more paragraph breaks.
Storyline: (5/10)
The two main characters meet in the first chapter and fall in love. There's nothing wrong with that if something happens afterwards that makes the reader anxious. It didn't captivate me, but that's just my opinion.
Grammar: [7/10]
Grammatical problems such as repetition of words can easily be avoided with a little care.
Character: [7/10]
The writer focused very much on Lily's character; the others are a bit hanging in the air.
Enjoyment: [4/10]
Due to the organization and the jumping of narration, reading didn't bring me enjoyment.
Overall: [6/10]
Total: [48/80]

Feedback: Your imagination is excellent, and I believe, with a bit of attention, you can rewrite it to make the story enjoyable. Right now, it feels like riding a bullet train, and we're scrambling our heads while reading. I suggest you stop while writing, look around, and get comfortable with the story. If I were writing the story, I wouldn't let the love between the main characters be fulfilled right away. I would put many obstacles in their way so that the reader roots for them. Decide who the narrator is; this is crucial.

Congratulations to all the winners!!!!

All the best to all the participants for your future.

Important note for the winners: kindly send me your email address for the prize within three days.