✧ Reviewer :: BTS7ARMY8FOREVER
✧ Reviewee :: _sashi
✧ Book :: A Larvikite for a Soul

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◖Basics :: 13.5 | 20◗

⚘ Cover :: 2.5 | 05

◍ I don't see how the picture used it related with the theme and the name of the story, like it does match with the thing that Anana the main character is a girl, hut something more relevant could ne used. The picture used isn't of good quality either. The font shade isn't visible and a better color could be chosen, try for something dark or with more opacity. You must use a picture that goes with the theme or the name. However everything that should be in a cover, is present, it'll still attract readers.

⚘ Synopsis :: 04 | 05

◍ The synopsis is small, make it long, that's all lacking in it. It has a dialogue which is a must just add in a scene with a cliffhanger to make it longer. It does not give off much of the plot and only as much as needed, i like that part and i must as well say it will get readers attracted to it.

⚘ Title :: 3.5 | 05

◍ The title is long yet convincing. It may or may not attract readers. The title suits the theme and the story well, but personally something better could be used. The title may make people think it's monotonous, however the cover will attract them then. I'd say, that you can use a shorter title, even if not, this seems fine.

⚘ Execution :: 3.5 | 05

◍ The plot is well written and well described. The blurb and the title is engaging as well, the cover though not the best cover for the story, engages readers as well. The story, however, needs to be described more, so as to feel more real. Even so, the way it is conveyed is just amazing.

○ Plot & Creativity :: 08 | 10

◍ The plot is really different because something like a voice in the back of the head of people is something really new and unique. Surely it is creative. I like they way the plot is structured and built, it isn't very fast paced either. However, there should be more cliffhangers and plot twists. I found a few plot holes, here and there, which need a little editing. The plot is well going and interesting. It'll keep readers hooked, however, I hope you don't make it cliché afterwards.

○ Writing Style :: 07 | 10

◍ The writing style is nice, the things are described well, however it can be written in a better manner. It's captivating yet very comprehensive and not very convincing. I'd say, more elaboration and detail about things, and better description of scenes would do. You sure do know how you make a cage of your words, the words are put down nicely, which isn't something everybody can do, however it isn't as convincing to me as I thought, describing the scenes, people, and other things would do.

◖Grammar & Vocabulary :: 19 | 20◗

⚘ Grammar :: 9.5 | 10

◍ There aren't any grammatical errors that I noticed. The grammar is fine and even if they're present it must be almost negligible. That's a great piece of work, keep it up!

⚘ Vocabulary :: 9.5 | 10

◍ The vocabulary is good too, neither very high nor very low. It could be understood easily. None of the phrases or lines are repeated over and over again, it's really great!

○ Emotions Conveyed :: 06 | 10

◍ The emotions used are correct, though they're missing. They're not used everywhere or you may say, used in a word or so, that it was almost negligible. Everybody can't write down emotions in words, in such a way that the person reading it, feels the emotion. So, it's alright, I've met very few authors who can master writing down emotions in words. They should be added everywhere and written down in very much detail, and you can use some similes to describe them or compare them to things around us which when they take place, we feel the same. The emotions must be written well to make a book feel lively, as they play an important role. It is necessary to understand them and feel them yourself before writing so that the person reading it can feel it.

○ Character Development :: 08 | 10

◍ The characters aren't well described, I guess. They need to be described more and told more about. They should be known to the readers, in a better manner. The characters play their roles, but it could be better. However, the characters are nice and well built. Though, it needs more description.

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Total :: 61.5 | 80

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