✧ Reviewer :: LunaticLxna
✧ Reviewee :: _mapl3
✧ Book :: Ivory Grey

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◖Basics :: 15 | 20◗

⚘ Cover :: 03 | 05

◍ The cover is quite catchy but could have been better, as the font looks good, the face claims too, but the color of the font doesn't match at all. You need to use the color which is visible yet matches with colors of the cover, the same for the font you've used in mentioning the author's name, it isn't visible, also the color, since the background is white, the lavender color doesn't match since both are soft colors.

⚘ Synopsis :: 04 | 05

◍ Straight to the point, the words used in the first paragraph are complicated, just the first one, you need to write them in a very simple and understanding language, the rest are good. So, overall the blurb is good but may improve, by writing it in more catchy words.

⚘ Title :: 4.5 | 05

◍ The title is satisfactory and authentic and matches the story's theme too.

⚘ Execution :: 04 | 05

◍ The book is executed nicely, as I read it, it's quite confusing how? I'll talk about it further in 'writing style'.

○ Plot & Creativity :: 07 | 10

◍ The plot is interesting, but if you would have written it more fascinatingly or delightfully, it would have been even more catchy to readers. So far, the story is not completed yet, so it lacked creativity, but I hope it gets improved later on as the story continues.

○ Writing Style :: 05 | 10

◍ The very first paragraph of the very first chapter looks like a mess, just think of yourself about what effect it will leave on the reader, as one of the first impressions. Why is that so? Because it's too long and has so many words, it looks very complex and problematic, it would have been divided into two or more paragraphs, and it would have made a better impression.
The same goes with all the paragraphs of the story so far, many of the paragraphs are complicated, not that they are written in a twisted way, yet it looks like that. The words you've used to write are really simple and understanding, well written.

◖Grammar & Vocabulary :: 16 | 20◗

⚘ Grammar :: 08 | 10

◍ Your grammar is good, I didn't find any errors. You may improve with words, it makes the story more attractive.

⚘ Vocabulary :: 08 | 10

◍ You can improve here, many words are repeated, so you can look for synonyms and use them while writing the upcoming chapters.

○ Emotions Conveyed :: 09 | 10

◍ As the story is written in a detailed way, it helps to convey emotions in a better way. So yeah, so far emotions are conveyed adequately.

○ Character Development :: 05 | 10

◍ As the story is ongoing, it's fine not to have much character development. I hope it fulfils the requirements of the story in upcoming chapters.

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Total :: 57.5 | 80

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