✧ Reviewer :: 112313Parnika
✧ Reviewee :: LemonSeokie
✧ Book :: Homicide

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◖Basics :: 12 | 20◗

⚘ Cover :: 02 | 05

◍ The cover didn't attract me much. It should be relatable to the story. Also, the face claims in the book should match well. You need to change the font and color of the text and position it. You can use appropriate face claims & elements to make it more attractive.

⚘ Synopsis :: 03 | 05

◍ I suggest you give a better explanation for the plot. And you should describe Jimin's character too a bit since he is also the main character. After that quotation, it went a little off. So you need to pay attention, if the summary you have written is captivating or not.

⚘ Title :: 04 | 05

◍ The title was very fancy and unique. I think this is the first book I have read with this title. It matches the plot too. However, to make it more clear to the readers, I would suggest you use a more suitable sub title.

⚘ Execution :: 03 | 05

◍ The plot was clear and lovely to read. The way it was taken further was impressive. But I would suggest you use a better cover and use some sub titles. I would suggest you to make the blurb a bit more attractive.

○ Plot & Creativity :: 07 | 10

◍ The plot was unique. It was good and it's the first time I've read a book with this plot. However, I would suggest you write the beginning like, as if it's describing what is going on with characters or what characters are feeling to make it more attractive and good to read.

○ Writing Style :: 06 | 10

◍ I suggest you tell something briefly and clear with which person is speaking what in some of the dialogues as it can puzzle readers at some point. Don't try to make certain things too lengthy as it can kill the interest of readers. Providing details is an important aspect, however, adding in unnecessary details ruins the flow.

◖Grammar & Vocabulary :: 14 | 20◗

⚘ Grammar :: 08 | 10

◍ I suggest you re-read the chapters as there is a slight mistake of not putting comma once you close a line you quoted. So re-read and then re-edit your work.

⚘ Vocabulary :: 06 | 10

◍ I'd suggest you use quotations or poems. Like it's the book dealing with a case, so if you use poems to describe what the chapter focuses on or what the character is feeling, you can use poems or sometimes quotations. It can attract readers.

○ Emotions Conveyed :: 06 | 10

◍ I suggest you explain the emotions a bit more. Like when Suga came to know that his best friend died, what all emotions he felt should have been explained a bit more.

○ Character Development :: 05 | 10

◍ As Suga is the male lead, I would focus on him more. Maybe describe his life in a gradual process? People should know about him too. Knowing a bit about character helps in development and connectivity between the reader & the respective characters.

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Total :: 50 | 80

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