✧ Reviewer :: CoolWhenUrBatman
✧ Reviewee :: SoftyHartz
✧ Book :: Paralyzed Love

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◖Basics :: 13.5 | 20◗

⚘ Cover :: 02 | 05

◍ Very simple and not related to the story. I'd suggest something that would convey the plot and the theme at least a little. Take important elements of the story and put them to picture.

⚘ Synopsis :: 04 | 05

◍ Very good, draws the attention and is very intriguing. 

⚘ Title :: 04 | 05

◍ Unique and related to the plot.

⚘ Execution :: 3.5 | 05

◍ Overall it's has a lot of potential but the small things I've mentioned act as a barrier for it to really reach where I think It can go. Good luck.

○ Plot & Creativity :: 08 | 10

◍ It's interesting, there aren't many books like this where the main character(s) struggle with a physical or mental problem. So the plot is unique, but add plot twists so It doesn't become monotonous.

○ Writing Style :: 07 | 10

◍ Standard. Nothing more to say.

◖Grammar & Vocabulary :: 15 | 20◗

⚘ Grammar :: 08 | 10

◍ Good, only problem I spotted was the misuse of fullstops at the end of dialogues when instead there should be a comma. This topic is a bit complicated due to the different factors that are involved but basic of it is this:

"Hello," he waved.
"Hello."
He smiled, "How are you?"

I'd suggest looking it up on the web, 'commas in dialogues'.

⚘ Vocabulary :: 07 | 10

◍ Very simple but everything is used appropriately. It's not in a way that would bore the readers but consider using more synonyms.

○ Emotions Conveyed :: 08 | 10

◍ The writing style makes it easy for the readers to understand what they're feeling and sympathize with them.

○ Character Development :: 09 | 10

 ◍ They're interesting, one thing I loved was the fact that they all had their own traits and faults. It's always interesting to see how they deal with their problems—especially in this case. They grow and learn and that's how you know you have a good and solid character.

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Total :: 60.5 | 80

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