✧ Reviewer :: 112313Parnika
✧ Reviewee :: 99ProblemsToSolve
✧ Book :: Kiara Flames

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◖Basics :: 12 | 20◗

⚘ Cover :: 03 | 05

◍ The cover looked different. It didn't relate to the story. I suggest you use a relatable background and attractive characters faces. If not faces, then you can keep the texts matching with the background. The elements of the cover should match.

⚘ Synopsis :: 02 | 05

◍ The blurb of this book is too big. It is exceeding the word limit. Long descriptions often decrease the interest of readers. You should keep in mind that you describe only the necessary details and make sure the blurb is entrancing enough to attract readers.

⚘ Title :: 04 | 05

◍ The title was unique and fancy. It attracted me towards the book but it didn't give me a clear idea of what the book was about. You can use a more relatable title or sub title for the book.

⚘ Execution :: 03 | 05

◍ I would suggest you use pictures in the start and end of chapter. If you keep it in middle, it will disturb the flow. I noticed that you have written I instead she in many places. Maybe 'cause it's in her point of view. But you need to specify if the story is being written in narrative style or in point of view.

○ Plot & Creativity :: 06 | 10

◍ I liked the plot of the book because it was unique. But again, the story wasn't described well. You should focus more the characters rather than their surroundings and what's happening around them. Then it will be realistic

○ Writing Style :: 06 | 10

◍ I feel at some places you have described the surroundings too much. It's good at a point as it helps in connecting with readers but describing things which are not necessary at that moment; it can bring boredom for readers. Keep in mind, that the text should be short, descriptive and attractive at the same time.

◖Grammar & Vocabulary :: 14 | 20◗

⚘ Grammar :: 08 | 10

◍ Keep in mind to use comma when you quote something but haven't ended the sentence yet. You are to use punctuations like commas and full stops. Their usage is less and they are not used at places where they should be used.

⚘ Vocabulary :: 06 | 10

◍ I suggest you use more professional terms when you describe emotions and surroundings. Though the poems at start and quotes at end did a good work.

○ Emotions Conveyed :: 04 | 10

◍ I feel the emotions of the lead aren't described well enough in the start. You have described the surroundings and her life style more. At least a short paragraph should be solely dedicated on her emotions as to what she is feeling.

○ Character Development :: 05 | 10

◍ I feel after both the leads met, it was rushed. The development of characters didn't go as they should have been. It was too quick, they met, they grew close and then everything else followed. I feel that more time should have been given to the characters here.

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Total :: 47 | 80

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