✧ Reviewer :: 112313Parnika
✧ Reviewee :: NightPrincessWrites
✧ Book :: Trained to be Her

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◖Basics :: 11 | 20◗

⚘ Cover :: 02 | 05

◍ You can make the cover more attractive and relatable to the story. It was just a photo. Even if it was, it didn't give any idea about the story. You should use a dark theme and an attractive face claim as required by the story. The elements in a cover should match well.

⚘ Synopsis :: 03 | 05

◍ The blurb of the book is huge in length. When I read the blurb, I got a bit of an idea of what I was going to read inside but then again, I had zero clue about the real plot or the characters of the book. What you gave was like a scene in the story. I suggest you to make your blurb descriptive and give some insight into the book & its characters a bit to increase interest of readers.

⚘ Title :: 03 | 05

◍ I think the title was unique and good enough to attract readers. I felt a little curious about the book when I read the title for the first time. It did gave me clues about the story.

⚘ Execution :: 03 | 05

◍ I suggest you mind the word limit while you writing prologue. As prologue is an intro of the story, it should be kept a bit trim, yet interesting enough to pull the readers. What you gave could be the chapter of the book. It was too long. Though the way you wrote was appreciated. There were bit of editing mistakes in the story. You need to re edit it. Some words are missing in between the texts.

○ Plot & Creativity :: 07 | 10

◍ The plot was unique and good. I liked reading the book. Everything was well described. But some plot holes came when you writing about deals between V and NightPrincess. I suggest you describe that part a bit more for it to be clear to readers.

○ Writing Style :: 08 | 10

◍ The writing style of the story was good enough to keep me engaged. The way you combined sarcasm with humor & yet was essential for the story really was good. Though I feel you should focus more on the ending of chapters. It can be written in a better way to force readers to turn to the next chapter.

◖Grammar & Vocabulary :: 10 | 20◗

⚘ Grammar :: 05 | 10

◍ In the prologue, when you introduced the character, you used plural form for one person. Night Princess is referring to only one girl, so woman should be used. If you use it for more than one, then you will use women.

⚘ Vocabulary :: 05 | 10

◍ I think the vocabulary usage can be improved. You described what the characters were thinking and who they were. Unique and fancy words could have been used here& there. But the usage here was pretty less.

○ Emotions Conveyed :: 06 | 10

◍ Emotions conveyed need to be improved. There are hardly any emotions conveyed about characters of the story. Even when you show a scene where violence is happening, you can describe emotions of the victims.

○ Character Development :: 07 | 10

◍ I think the character development was good enough till where I have read. The quotes helped a lot to know about the characters. But I feel, when you introduce them, a bit more about their personalities should be told for better connectivity with them.

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Total :: 49 | 80

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