Loving Audrey

by

Pollywritess

Review by lovechild777

Cover: 8/10

I like your cover. Its nice and appealing and intrigues the reader. The only thing that I'd change would be the subtitle at the top. Make it a bit more clearer so that the reader can see it properly.

Title: 8/10

I've heard and read books with these sorts of titles so that's why I'm deducting marks since so many people have titles like this. However, with that being said, if you type up this title on the wattpad search bar, it's the first one that comes up.

Blurb: 8.5/10

Your blurb was okay, it gave us a summary and peak into the story. However, i feel like it needed to be a bit more detailed. I'm all for detailed blurbs since they hook the reader in and urge them to read the book. Also, I'd change the question

'What could go wrong?'

Only because so many people use that question at the end of something (even i have) and you just know by the sound of that that something bad is going to happen so it kind of ruins a bit of the story. 

Grammar: 10/10

Your grammar was on point! I hardly noticed any mistakes and if there were any, they were very small ones.

Plot: 9.5/10

I loved this story! I read it all today and it was just amazing! Love Audrey and Josh! I think that the plot flowed so well and everything about it was amazing! I really hope that you're successful in getting this book published, I would totally pick this up in a shop!.

Overall: 9.5/10

I have no words other than that you wrote such an amazing story! All of the characters were well developed and it was just ugh, the cherry on top (excuse my moment of cheesiness). Can't wait to see where this book goes!

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