Book title - Our Everlasting Love

Author - _sagigirl_

Reviewer - RuVineet

Review - The story began on an interesting note. I loved the sneak peaks given in between the chapters. The  Fab- 5  are amazing. I loved how all of them bond with Anil and Maya. Manik is really lucky to have them as his best friends.

The flashback where Manik was a cheerful young lad were cute. Cabir and Manik's arguments were cute. The way the friends interacted with each other was cute.. I almost had a smile upon reading them all. The emotions are very nicely incorporated in the story.

There are two things in which the author should work.

Number 1 - The author can put a little more effort and work on the descriptions. It will emphasize your work and have an impact on readers. This is what I have learnt in five years of my writing.

Number 2- the author has to work on their vocabulary and Punctuation. Try to use comma and fullstop where necessary. I also found some long sentences. You can make them short and impactful.

Overall, the author has done a great job. Only if they work on the two points mentioned above, it will give a good improvement in their writing.

A job well done. Keep writing.

Rating - 3/5

I hope, the review is helpful.

Thank you,
RuVineet[Roohi]