Book: Powerless: Be Careful What You Wish For

Author: GlitchandGlitz

Reviewer: Praahi

About the book:

Powerless is a story of a girl named Quinley who refuses to use her ability for any reason. In a world where Rank and power rules, where violence is praised and peace is nonexistent. So how will she find her way through a sea of power-deprived peers who will do anything to get to the top, even if it means demolishing one of their own?

*I took the above lines from the description of the story as they really got my attention before I started reading the story.

*It is an ongoing story with 9 parts published.

Review:

- The cover is beautiful and apt for the story.

- The title is unique, and I feel it briefs the main plot surrounding the main protagonist Quinley. Though I couldn't comment much on that because only 9 chapters were published.

- I loved the description more than the prologue. It is really catchy and absolutely what the reader wants to know. Coming to the prologue, the author has maintained that aura of mystery and created that interest to know what the story would be further. So, the purpose of the blurb is fulfilled.

- The story-line is unique and all the while when reading, one would feel as if it is going on in some other world ruled by king. The story is narrated in the form of point of views of main characters for suppose, each chapter is narrated by one character or two as per the convenience. Yet there is no chance of confusion. The story has been narrated well.

- The characters were strong and unique in their own way building up the story to be an interesting one.

- The only thing that I felt missing is the character introduction because of which I took some time to get acquainted to the story.

- Apart from few typos, there are not many grammatical errors. The tense and punctuations were maintained properly. Excellent usage of vocabulary but the variation in dialogue construction and font may sometimes be annoying to the reader. Try maintaining the same style all through the story.

Best Things:

- Cover

- Vocabulary

Need To Improve

- Character description

- Dialogue construction

Overall, I would say that the story is very interesting and gripping. All the best for your future projects.

Thank you,

Praahi

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