Book Name: The way of the wind

Author: Bezaunungieye

Reviewer: Praahi

About the story:

King Tus III and his Queen are in search of a bride for their son who want to marry a girl whose thoughts move the Earth. What happens when they find a girl named Alysia with special powers? She went through a lot when her kingdom was raided and her family was separated. She was sold as a slave to a goldsmith from where she escaped with her powers but was captured and sent to the King to be the wife of his son. To know whether her special abilities are a blessing or a curse, one must read the story.

Review:

- The title is perfect for the story but the cover could have been more attractive. 

- The plot is unique and I totally loved the concept. The royal life and the sufferings of a slave were narrated so well that I could feel every emotion reading the story. 

* This story is divided into three parts with 60 chapters.

- The description is well placed not giving away much and creating interest which is very important to force the reader to open the book to read further. Must appreciate on that.

- Actually, I couldn't find the pictures of the characters as you mentioned in the cast photos. It is always recommended to have character introduction to make it easier for the reader.

- I loved your writing style the most as you mentioned every minute detail starting from the place and the names...I felt I was reading a full fledged historical novel. 

- I couldn't find many grammatical errors or typos but I saw that you have used present tense. Though the tense is maintained very nicely right from the beginning till the end of the story, past tense would have made the story narration more exciting. (Just a suggestion though)

Overall, I would say that the story has been written beautifully with every small emotion taken into consideration. Keep writing and shining brighter. All the best dear. Hope I have not offended you.

Thank you,

Praahi

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