Book Name: What happened to our Happily Ever After?

Author: RavenclawCullen

Reviewer: Praahi

About the story:

The story is about Liliana Rose who loves her brother Emmett more than herself but his disappearance and the immediate death of her parents crumbles her world. Though her brother Julian was with her for few days...when he goes missing leaving her alone, what Liliana would do? Will she survive? To know further one must read the story.

* The story has ten published parts.

Review:

- The cover is beautiful and attractive and the title is perfect for the story.

- What caught my attention the most is the character description. It was unique and detailed. Must appreciate the author for this.

- The description was short but had explained what the story is going to be about. Little more details would have created more interest for the readers.

- I found the updates were really very short in the first few chapters...please try maintaining a word count of about 700 to 1000 words so that readers wouldn't loose interest. (Just a suggestion)

- Nice plot with the bond between siblings narrated well. It was emotional reading about Liliana's reaction on the disappearance of Emmett. 

- I found that the story was narrated in the point of view of Liliana, adding conversations and dialogues would make the story more engaging is what I feel, do think about it.

- The grammar and tense were perfect though you will have to take care a bit about punctuation here and there. I couldn't find any typos or spelling mistakes.

Overall, a beautiful story with a nice mystery. I would recommend it to all the fantasy lovers.

Keep writing and all the best for your future projects dear. Hope I have not been harsh.

Thank you,

Praahi

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