Heart in a shell by: Osasauyy111
Requested by: Osasauyy111

First I want to talk about the cover of the book. The cover I loved a lot. I liked the dark colors and I think the red colored font of the title was good too. It really helped made the title pop out more and it's easy to notice as well.

Next is the summary. I found it to be good and found nothing that needed to be fixed. I really liked how it had a mysterious sort of vibe to it.

Next is the writing structure and grammatical errors. I didn't really find any grammar errors from what I could tell so good job on that. Plus I really liked the writing structure and how you describe things.

Now for pacing and the plot. I loved the pacing and plot of the story so far. I liked how you took the time to develop the relationship between each character and how each of their dynamics work between each other as well and how that will affect them going forward.

Next is the setting and the characters of the book. First is the setting. I liked how you described the setting of the book and the characters. I could easily visual it in my head and know what was happening in each scene.

Next are the characters. I loved the characters and the relationship between them. I liked how you were able to set up each dynamic between them without rushing it and giving it time for people to process and see how they interact with each other and how they might play out later in the story.

Overall, it's a good story and I would recommend it to anyone who loves reading books like it.

Thanks for letting me review your book.

-Traveler_lilly