Warning: Before I start this review, I want to say that the author has deleted the story since I made this review. In which I did not know about until now, so, sorry for those of you who wanted to read this story and check it out.

Plastic Beauty by: lovetop101

Requested by: lovetop101

Before I get into this review, this might be a long review because I got lots to say about this book and hope I am not too harsh with this review.
Okay now onto the review.

I think the story is interesting for a teen fiction novel especially since the whole revenge on my bullies and abuse thing has been done a lot in teen fiction books. But I also felt like the story is a bit rushed in my opinion. You don't really get to know the main character as much aside from her narrative and a couple flashbacks which is fine but it feels more tell than show since a lot of what we're given for her past and what her relationships are like are through dialogue and not actions.

Plus her moods switch way too quickly for a normal person to do since a normal person wouldn't be able to switch their moods that quickly unless they had personality disorder or some other similar disorder.

On top of that, I wish you showed more on what her relationship was like with her parents and friends at home and at school as well since it would make it more believable rather than just saying that she was bullied and needs to get revenge on them for hurting her. Plus I don't think she needed to wear a mask to hide her face since quite a few people don't hide their face with a mask when they don't look as beautiful as some people.

Plus running away with cookies from the store and coming back to it, I am pretty sure that she would be arrested for that if it did happen in real life and I doubt she would be pinned to the wall of the store if the male lead was just flirting with her. At most, he would be leaning up against the wall either in front or on the side of her.

Including the fact that if her house was falling apart and no one is living in it anymore, wouldn't she have moved her stuff out of it rather than just leave it there? That part doesn't make sense unless she planned on getting rid of her belongings. Plus what her personality like before she got plastic surgery and was acting like a bitch. Was she shy? Nerdy? or really Outgoing? What were her interests?

On top that, if she found out that her mom died, wouldn't she be taking time to get over the loss of her mom rather than say "Oh I missed her but I am glad she's gone cause she's gone now." Like I know she hasn't seen her in years and that the mom was terrible to her but I am pretty sure that people would be crying a lot more and taking more time to mourn the loss of a loved one than say something like that and go back to whatever it was that they were doing.

Plus the characters all seem one sided as we don't get to much of their personalities aside from what we're given in the dialogue. Plus the male lead agreeing to help her get revenge on her bullies doesn't logical to me cause he didn't really have a good reason to help her since he was fat back when they were kids and lost a lot of weight since then which is a normal thing for a lot of people to do since a lot of people tend to eat better and workout when they want to lose weight. So he had no reason to help her since he wasn't bullied as bad as her anyway so I don't see the point in that. I felt like it was a plot device to help the main characters bond and fall in love when he could have helped her see that revenge, plastic surgery and acting like a bitch aren't always the best things to do when you get bullied and abused as a kid. Plus she could have helped him see that acting like a jerk isn't how treat a person when they have nothing but been nice to you.
Also please describe more of the town and settings so, readers can get more clearer picture of the setting on where the story takes place at.

Overall I felt disconnected from the story, plot and the characters and it felt really unrealistic to the point where I felt like it just annoying.

Again hope I wasn't too harsh with this review. So, thanks for letting me review and read your book.

- Traveler_lilly